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Grounding

Mist covered tall trees Myna on a wire Sunshine mugged by clouds Smoke of factory Road snaking uphill Cold numb fingers Chill wind on face Dry thirsty throat Eyes yearning more Humming wind Rustling leaves My breathing Wet soil Wet wood Bread

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/18/2024 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful "Grounding" write/story. I enjoyed reading it. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/18/2024 8:36:00 PM

Thank you so much dear friend. I am glad you liked it. I am grateful to you for the Blessings. happy writing to you too, Cheers.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2024 4:08:00 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Very descriptive scene painted. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/17/2024 9:26:00 PM

Thank you dear poet for this lovely contest. I am grateful to you for your precious time, effort and congratulatory message. Thank you for the placement. Means so much to me. Thank you.Cheers!!

Valsa George

Date: 12/17/2024 4:04:00 AM

Hi Thriveni, back to your beautiful poem to congratulate you on your win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/17/2024 9:24:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for sweet return with sweeter compliments, Thank you very much for your blessings.Cheers!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:15:00 AM

- Great written ... congratulations, thriveni :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/16/2024 8:28:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for this pleasant visit and lovely words. Appreciation from you means a lot to me, thank you for today's joy. Blessings, Cheers and Hugs too

Marilene Evans

Date: 12/16/2024 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations! Excellent imagery!!! Four senses working in a cold walk outside and getting in with the taste of bread to warm up. Blessings.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/16/2024 8:25:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for your sweet words. hmm humble bread it is, you got it - I am grateful to you for your blessings, Happy Holidays dear poet. Cheers!!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/16/2024 5:22:00 AM

nice progression, Thriveni... I like the random alliteration too. My imagination soars to fix a more concrete scenario and I settle on a difficult trip walking home enjoying various sensations and finally hunger satisfied at home. Thanks for a beautiful hexaverse.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/16/2024 8:23:00 PM

I am grateful to you for your kind visit dear poet. You just made my day by your pleasant generous words dear poet. Thank you very much, your visit is a blessing for me! Cheers.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2024 1:46:00 PM

I really like the staccato imagery in this diminished hexaverse, Thriveni. Well done. All the best // paul

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/9/2024 4:45:00 AM

I am grateful to you for your kind words dear poet, means so much to me. Thank you for this precious visit and Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2024 10:51:00 PM

I really like how you did this. It's such an interesting challenge for us.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/7/2024 4:37:00 AM

Interesting it is, yes dear poet. I am glad you like this poem. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Cheers.

Valsa George

Date: 12/5/2024 9:37:00 PM

Beautifully composed. An apt entry for the contest. All the Best Thriveni...

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/6/2024 4:36:00 AM

I am so grateful to you for your kind visit and words dear poet friend. Your wishes is blessings to me. Thank you. Cheers.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/5/2024 5:59:00 AM

I really like how you composed this poem with many metaphoric layers and fine wording

thriveni c mysore
Date: 12/6/2024 4:35:00 AM

I am honored by your visit and words dear poet. Thank you. Blessings & Cheers.