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?Written 24th August - A Fruity and Funny Limerick Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Tania Kitchen

Groovy Lucy

Come on over Ted said groovy Lucy
For tonight I’m feeling nice and juicy
Ted appeared unclothed 
With assets exposed
For the sake of a strawberry smoothie.

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2023

humorouslimerick

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Paula Goldsmith

September 5, 2023 at 8:21 PM

Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write/picture. I love strawberry smoothies, guess I will look at them in a different light. Have a great/fun day writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler

September 5, 2023 at 6:55 AM

So cute Belle, abd clever to boot! Congratulations! :)

September 3, 2023 at 4:58 PM

Belle, cute and creative, congratulations on your winning placement!

September 3, 2023 at 5:52 PM

Thank you Tania… Belle

August 28, 2023 at 3:54 PM

very witty indeed Belle:-) hugs Jan xx

September 3, 2023 at 5:51 PM

Thank you Jan :-) hugs, Belle xx

August 26, 2023 at 9:34 AM

That's a good one sister Beryl.

August 26, 2023 at 9:47 AM

Thanks very much brother John… Sis Belle

August 25, 2023 at 6:16 PM

lovely, a feel good smoothie to share, have a nice sunday

August 26, 2023 at 9:45 AM

Thank you Yann, have a nice Sunday too… Belle

August 24, 2023 at 9:07 PM

OMG, I have to fave this :) Got me LOL… So smackin’ good :)

August 26, 2023 at 9:44 AM

Thank you so much Akkina, it’s nice to receive feedback like this. ~ Bless you Belle

August 24, 2023 at 5:03 PM

Even a smoothie wouldn't cool down this hot limerick! The second line is quite the invitation, lol.

August 24, 2023 at 5:08 PM

It is that David. Thank you … Belle

August 24, 2023 at 12:16 AM

Lol, some gems for this contest Belle, this is another. Soup mail. Tom

August 24, 2023 at 5:12 PM

Thank you for your comments Tom and the SoupMail… Belle

August 23, 2023 at 8:21 PM

So funny. Enjoyed reading, Belle. Love the change of color in your hair, good luck in the contest. Many blessings my friend.

August 24, 2023 at 5:10 PM

Thank you Eve, pleased you enjoyed the read and like the colour of my hair… Belle

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