Groan

I'd stopped to have a rest on our morning jungle trek
and had leaned against a liana covered tree
in this land I was a stranger and I didn't see the danger 
that was lurking  just a foot away from me.
With the pinpoint lightning strike like a fencer's foil might 
it attacked, then a hiss, and it  was gone
it's fast acting Dendrotoxin knocked me out like I'd been boxing
but thank God I had my guide to call upon.
The doctor checked my throat and got out some antidotes
though he didn't know what species had attacked,
but my guide had took a shot, and the photo he had got
would be proof enough to back up all the facts.
The doctor took a look and consulted in a book
after leafing through the pages he declared
“ You're lucky to be here, it's a species to be feared
and if it had been me, I'd have been scared”.
I went white as a sheet, he said “ it's length is fourteen feet
coal black eyes, scales lime green, belly of amber,
but the crown on it's head  confirms to me without a doubt
you've been bitten by a lifetime premium Mamba.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 1:45 PM
- .... and we are lucky to still have you here :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 5:43 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, I tread carefully, Viv x
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 9:19 AM
I see you are in a humorous mood. An enjoyable read.
Wigley Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Richard, a bit of buffoonery. Regards, Viv
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