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Gristmill

So, this  is where the sheaves were hauled
Where corn was husked, and seeds were hulled

So, this is where the meal was ground,
until the clock ran down

Round and round
a donkey bound
Asleep, awake.  By night and day
The millstone tossed the dust around

Vibrations trembled thick stone walls
Humming sounds before the dawn,
bemoaning hymns of tranquil breathing.
The staff of life was there for reaping
until winds hushed this quiet song

No stone could grind the past away
The heart of life kept beating on,...

until the clock ran down

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5/25/18
Contest: The Gristmill
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 5:43 PM
This is beautiful Carrie. Did it win in the contest? I hope so. : ) xxoo
Thomas Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Carrie this is great! I couldn't for the life of me think of a poem about a Grist Mill and you've made one so eloquently.
George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Yes! So few still remain. Beautiful picture and beautiful poem in perfect harmony. Many congrats on your win, Carrie. Elaine
Gentry Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Congratulations on your win! An amazing poem, well-written.
Parker Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 6:27 AM
excellent flow with this one, a very easy read...I've read quite a few of these this one will do very well...I took a different direction with mine
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Frederic. One never knows what Craig is looking for, .....it may be too simplistic this time! thanks for stopping by!
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 2:43 AM
excellent, Carrie. I predict a top win!
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Thank you for checking my poem, Andrea!!
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