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So, this is where the sheaves were hauled Where corn was husked, and seeds were hulled So, this is where the meal was ground, until the clock ran down Round and round a donkey bound Asleep, awake. By night and day The millstone tossed the dust around Vibrations trembled thick stone walls Humming sounds before the dawn, bemoaning hymns of tranquil breathing. The staff of life was there for reaping until winds hushed this quiet song No stone could grind the past away The heart of life kept beating on,... until the clock ran down __________________________________________________ 5/25/18 Contest: The Gristmill Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/28/2018 5:43:00 PM
This is beautiful Carrie. Did it win in the contest? I hope so. : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:47:00 PM
Carrie this is great! I couldn't for the life of me think of a poem about a Grist Mill and you've made one so eloquently.
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Date: 6/22/2018 9:11:00 AM
Yes! So few still remain. Beautiful picture and beautiful poem in perfect harmony. Many congrats on your win, Carrie. Elaine
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Date: 6/22/2018 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! An amazing poem, well-written.
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Date: 5/26/2018 6:27:00 AM
excellent flow with this one, a very easy read...I've read quite a few of these this one will do very well...I took a different direction with mine
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/29/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Frederic. One never knows what Craig is looking for, .....it may be too simplistic this time! thanks for stopping by!
Date: 5/26/2018 2:43:00 AM
excellent, Carrie. I predict a top win!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/29/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thank you for checking my poem, Andrea!!

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