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" GRIEVING HEART " MY PHOTO, ©

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On Valentine's day A grieving heart Cupid approached and thus It spoke: "Come, oh Cupid, You winged child of Venus and Mercury, come and tell me, once more, why should I, willingly, offer myself as a target again for your sharp arrows of love to practice on?" "Have you forgotten the times your sweet arrows have failed to keep their promises of bliss but instead have brought me lots of excruciating pain?" Surprised Cupid, Looked at the complaining heart and austerely thus Replied: " Oh, you foolish heart First, you ought to know that the target my arrows never miss and if sometimes seems that they do so please don't assume that it is my mistake for I always aim at the target you, yourself, so enthusiastically to me present each time declaring your every infatuation as your eternal love to be however, if you had avoided this tactic and more cautious you were I assure you that alien grief to you would have forever remained!" © Demetrios Trifiatis 14 February 2019 * For each one of us, our Lord has chosen someone special, so happy us to make. Happy Valentine!

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Date: 2/14/2019 6:14:00 PM
hello Demetrious, well this is a different type of Valentine\s Day poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/15/2019 2:50:00 AM
YES,it is different my dearest, Darlene for it is written for all those broken hearts! Tried to , indirectly, advice how to avoid bad situations! Thank you for your kind visit!
Date: 2/14/2019 1:37:00 PM
Well written Demetrios :)
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Date: 2/15/2019 2:52:00 AM
The purpose of writing this dearest, Heidi, was to console and warn hearts that were not happy! Thank you my friend!
Date: 2/14/2019 7:08:00 AM
Another lovely Valentine gift for the day..well said my friend. Beautiful yellow flowers.
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Date: 2/14/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thank you dear friend, Vijay for your gracious visit and comment!
Date: 2/14/2019 2:51:00 AM
- Cupid always does the right thing - Sometimes you have to work hard to keep love alive - We must endure adversity and bad days, and slowly builds a lasting love :) - Happy Valentine's Day, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2019 4:38:00 AM
Thank you for seeing things eye to eye dearest, Anne-Lise . I appreciate your comment! Hugs xxx Happy Valentine's!
Date: 2/14/2019 2:51:00 AM
Some mistake infatuation for love but real love comes from the heart. You're right, Cupid never misses but only if we show him our heart. Tom.
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Date: 2/14/2019 4:39:00 AM
Happy we are in agreement my friend, Tom! Thank you so much for lovely visit!