Grieve

I never knew what would happen
the sudden immobile tongue
I sweat and cry hail
                                         Please forgive me
       but they leave a trail
      The warmth within my hands disappear
                                                         Please forgive me
                          I wish I knew what happened
                          what this pitiful sinner did
                                                              Please forgive me
                              I did not know it would be this difficult
                              I would crucify my love for you
                                                                     Please forgive me
                                     The hero within me has been broken
                                      The liquefied sack of me leaks
                                                                         Please forgive me
                                             I wonder if I really meant to just
                                             hurt myself within my love
I've finally realized I've forced my love onto you.
Let you choke.
falter
I wish I haven't
making you live
a fake
book 
life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/27/2010 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Shiki. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:02:00 PM
My congratulations on your win in the "Betrayal" contest. ...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:57:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a wonderful write for a wonderful win from a wonderful poet.. enjoy this victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 1/13/2010 3:01:00 AM
As Constance La France stated - this is very crative. Great writing, Shiki. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:03:00 AM
A really creative form you have given us with your powerful poetry.. well done.... and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, One Night, is it a wish to be with my loved ones? Yes, that is the hidden meaning... I only find them down the winding road to the place of tears..
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