Shiki Remindio Poet Free verse

Grieve

I never knew what would happen
the sudden immobile tongue
I sweat and cry hail
                                         Please forgive me
       but they leave a trail
      The warmth within my hands disappear
                                                         Please forgive me
                          I wish I knew what happened
                          what this pitiful sinner did
                                                              Please forgive me
                              I did not know it would be this difficult
                              I would crucify my love for you
                                                                     Please forgive me
                                     The hero within me has been broken
                                      The liquefied sack of me leaks
                                                                         Please forgive me
                                             I wonder if I really meant to just
                                             hurt myself within my love
I've finally realized I've forced my love onto you.
Let you choke.
falter
I wish I haven't
making you live
a fake
book 
life.

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Anonymous Ah February 27, 2010 at 2:16 PM Beautiful

Carol Sunshine Brown February 26, 2010 at 7:35 AM Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Shiki. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick February 25, 2010 at 1:02 PM My congratulations on your win in the "Betrayal" contest. ...Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2010 at 12:57 PM Congrats on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a wonderful write for a wonderful win from a wonderful poet.. enjoy this victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Elaine George January 13, 2010 at 3:01 AM As Constance La France stated - this is very crative. Great writing, Shiki. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. lainie

Constance La France January 10, 2010 at 12:03 AM A really creative form you have given us with your powerful poetry.. well done.... and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, One Night, is it a wish to be with my loved ones? Yes, that is the hidden meaning... I only find them down the winding road to the place of tears..