Grief of Losing a Life Partner-Potd

It is important we know this eternal truth,
that our earthly lives may be linked but not our deaths!
you may have special memories from early youth,
but one has to watch the other take the last breath!

you will for sure shed tears of separation, grief,
fear future prospect of  life without the other,
but thank God for the lovely life however brief!
pray after life you still wish to be together!

we do not choose to be born nor do we choose death,
in the garden of creation we bloom and rest,
relish every moment of fortune and good health,
but when the end comes, please trust him for He knows best!!

let not this despondency rob your faith in Him,
as you are precious to others as was to you,
life must still be lived and cherished however grim,
destiny has plans for you till you bid adieu!

Dedicated to Line Gauthier who has lost her husband
Written 19/11/2020 after reading Gershon’s tribute to Line

POTD 21/11/2020

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Date: 2/6/2021 4:18:00 AM
You should read this Krish. Very profound poem for anyone facing the grief of death. Try to keep yourself busy. Remember your mother did not suffer as many do. You should be happy for her. Just think of her, only her. Won't she be happy to die painlessly without troubles to self and others. If you sit and keep thinking of her, your grief will never end. Read Gita chapter two. Take care. Rama.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/7/2021 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Rama! My own words bring me solace! I am slowly gaining in strength!
Date: 11/26/2020 5:53:00 AM
Beautiful heart touching poem...
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Date: 11/26/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Maja! pleased you like it!:)
Date: 11/25/2020 10:37:00 AM
Hello Krish Radhakrishna, This isi a lovely tribute to Lin. You wrote it from your heart. It made my eyes teary. I like the line relish every moment of fortune and health but when the end comes, please trust in him. Beautiful words spoken. To that i add Amen!
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Date: 11/25/2020 11:56:00 AM
Hello Krish, thank you Krish. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/25/2020 11:07:00 AM
Darlene my gratitude to you for your kind words! God bless!
Date: 11/25/2020 9:40:00 AM
Beautifully written poem. I was feeling it from start to finish
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Date: 11/25/2020 10:05:00 AM
Brooks, Thank you! Appreciate your fine words!:)
Date: 11/22/2020 7:33:00 AM
Awesome poem, Krish. I have FAV'd it because I'll want to read it over and over again.
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Date: 11/22/2020 7:51:00 AM
Honoured Line! You have the full support of the soup members! It would please us to see our poetry bring you solace! Kind regards
Date: 11/22/2020 6:56:00 AM
Belated congrats on this wonderful write, Krish. Yours far exceeded mine, properly reflected in POTD. May you have many more, and may Line be comforted in her hour of trial. Hope and Light, Gershon
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Date: 11/22/2020 7:30:00 AM
Gershon, my friend, thanks for your good wishes and support! You have an equal share because you inspired that poem out of me! My kind regards Krish
Date: 11/21/2020 6:45:00 PM
A thoughtful tribute to our dear Line! Congrats on POTD!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/21/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thanks Kim!:) Appreciate your support! :)
Date: 11/21/2020 6:32:00 PM
"Thank God for the lovely life however brief" Yes, I completely agree. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Such a tender write for Line. Congratulations Krish, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/21/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thank you Brandy! It is such a pleasure to get such lovely words of support from you! May God be with you in all your endevours!
Date: 11/21/2020 1:55:00 PM
I love this. It's a awesome write... so honest and true. God bless you always dear friend and congrats on POTD
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Date: 11/21/2020 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Regina! glad you like it! God bless and stay safe my friend!
Date: 11/21/2020 1:39:00 PM
This is a lovely tribute Krish. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/21/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thanks Connie! Pleased to have your supportive comments!
Date: 11/21/2020 1:19:00 PM
- Really kind of you to write this beautiful poem to Line, Krish ... "a heart in her grief" ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! God bless you! You are a great friend who is always encouraging poets! Happy you like my poem!
Date: 11/21/2020 11:32:00 AM
What a lovely, well-written tribute, Krish! Thanks so much for sharing.
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Date: 11/21/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Milton! So happy you like it!:)
Date: 11/21/2020 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations, I am see so glad this got Potd. Now hopefully line will read it
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Date: 11/21/2020 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Rama! You were the first to wish me and thanks for your revisit! Hope Line likes it.
Date: 11/21/2020 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I love your line, "we do not choose to be born nor do we choose death." This is so very true. The is a wonderful write you dedicated to Line Gauthier who just lost her husband. May you both be greatly blessed.....................
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Date: 11/21/2020 10:02:00 AM
Paula Thank you! Your kindness shows in your comment as it does in many of your poems! May God bless you!
Date: 11/21/2020 8:55:00 AM
Krish, this is a lovely dedication to Line and her beloved Denise, and congratulations on receiving POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance
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Date: 11/21/2020 10:00:00 AM
Constance thanks very much! So happy to hear from you. Yes, Poetry soup is like a family and I am so pleased with the support for Line.
Date: 11/21/2020 8:34:00 AM
Krish, this is a wonderful, thoughtful gift for Line. It is filled with faith and hope. Congratulations on your POTD. So happy to see this as a POTD. Sending you congratulations and blessings.
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Date: 11/21/2020 9:56:00 AM
Sam My gratitude and thank you for your words as they cheer me up! A happy surprise this! Stay safe my friend!
Date: 11/21/2020 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Line will love it
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Date: 11/21/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Eve! Much appreciate your words! my regards!
Date: 11/21/2020 6:44:00 AM
Truly beautiful and congratulations on POTD...
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Date: 11/21/2020 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Akinna! Pleased you like it! Much appreciate your visit and support!
Date: 11/21/2020 5:03:00 AM
Congrats Krish on POTD. Awesome sentiments you express in this dedication to Line.
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Date: 11/21/2020 5:34:00 AM
Vijay, I am honoured my friend! appreciate your words of support! regards! Krish
Date: 11/21/2020 4:01:00 AM
Well done...Congratulations on Krish Radhakrishna on POTD...
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Date: 11/21/2020 5:01:00 AM
Arturo Thanks my friend! very pleased and surprised!
Date: 11/21/2020 3:45:00 AM
Wow Krishji... this is too good a dedication to Line Gauthier. 'When the end comes, trust in Him for He knows best... so so true. 'We come alone, we go alone... to be attached with EVERYONE by our loving kind acts with a sense of detachment in mind holds good always.. and yes our birth and death choices are His. A very deserving POTD. God bless you. Have a great day. ~ Ani
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Date: 11/21/2020 5:00:00 AM
Ani Thank you! it is so sweet of you! I love your feedback and always love to have your comments! blessings to you! Krish
Date: 11/21/2020 2:52:00 AM
How kind of you to reveal your empathy for Line in these compassionate lines, Krish. I'm sure her heart will hold them close. Congratulations on being acknowledged as potd.
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Date: 11/21/2020 3:36:00 AM
Jenna Thank you very much! That we can reach out in times of need is the greatest human attribute! Hope our efforts provide the healing! Hugs!
Date: 11/21/2020 2:25:00 AM
WoW! Krish, What a moving and touching piece to write for Line, they are words of comfort in her time of bereavement. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved-Alexis
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Date: 11/21/2020 2:48:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! I hope it brings healing to wounded hearts. Pleased with all the kindness that soupers have shown to Line. Much appreciate your words of support!
Date: 11/21/2020 12:51:00 AM
This is so sensitively penned Krish, Line's husband's brave fight with cancer and his death have touched many of us on soup and I know how much she appreciates support from the soup community. I was so moved by her own POTD and GW's poem I hope Line and others in her position continue to get comfort through their writing. Many congrats on POTD, adding this to my faves:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:14:00 AM
Jan You are so right about comfort that we can bring to poetry soup family. I am honoured to be declared POTD and delighted you have Fave it! Most importantly we are all there to support Line during this difficult time! regards Krish
Date: 11/21/2020 12:42:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to Line and a well deserved honour of POTD. Congratulations Krish. Tom
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:10:00 AM
Tom thank you for your kindness and support! I hope we as soup family can support one another during difficult phases of our lives! POTD is a pleasant surprise! :)
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