Grief

An all-encompassing shadow, grief follows wherever you go. And tucks you into bed at night, only to appear in your dreams. And you awake to nightmare screams; alone with your thoughts, filled with fright. Grief embraces sorrow and pain, while teardrops burn: like acid rain, and darkness extinguishes light. Belief can sometimes offset grief, but faith offers little relief; by praying that you'll be alright. An all-encompassing shadow; as grief wells: the tears start to flow. And you can't stop; try as you might, those trickling tears morph into streams. And nothing is quite what it seems; it's like falling: from a great height. Grief tends to overwhelm your brain, and just about drives you insane; fueling feelings of midnight. Within your state of disbelief self-pity becomes your motif; lamenting that life is finite. When your heart's broken by sorrow, nothing in life ever feels right; for grief robs you of tomorrow.
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La France Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 11:31 PM
Emile, excellent writing with this wonderful Hutinashro rhyme form created by Connor, I must try it. Yes, grief and sorrow is like a chain holding us prisoner. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I like the image quote and your quote also blessings, Constance
Pinet Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thanks, Constance, it's always a personal pleasure to enter your contest, you never fail to inspire me, my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 10:49 AM
- Agree with your last three lines, Emile ... a beautiful poem - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 7:25 PM
A vivid illustration of grief. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:23 PM
I relate to your words Emile my friend. I will fav this one. Constant sorrow is debilitating in many ways. Congratulations on your win! :)
Pinet Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Thanks, Linda, I agree, sorrow is debilitating in many ways...as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Peck Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:11 PM
It is true what you say about grief, and you said it beautifully. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:27 PM
Thanks, Ann, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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