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Grief

An all-encompassing shadow; grief stalks you wherever you go. And tucks you into bed at night while invading your private dreams. And you awake to nightmare screams; alone with your thoughts, filled with fright. Grief embraces sorrow and pain; as teardrops burn like acid rain, and darkness extinguishes light. Beliefs can be offset by grief, for faith offers little relief; by praying that you'll be alright. An all-encompassing shadow; as grief wells, your tears start to flow. And they won't stop; try as you might; trickles of tears morph into streams. And nothing is quite what it seems; it's like falling from a great height. Grief tends to overwhelm your brain and just about drives you insane; fueling feelings of twilight. Within this state of disbelief self-pity becomes your motif; lamenting that life is finite. When your heart is filled with sorrow, nothing in life ever feels right; for grief robs your life of gusto.

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Date: 3/1/2023 11:31:00 PM
Emile, excellent writing with this wonderful Hutinashro rhyme form created by Connor, I must try it. Yes, grief and sorrow is like a chain holding us prisoner. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I like the image quote and your quote also blessings, Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, it's always a personal pleasure to enter your contest, you never fail to inspire me, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2023 10:49:00 AM
- Agree with your last three lines, Emile ... a beautiful poem - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/25/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 7:25:00 PM
A vivid illustration of grief. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 3:23:00 PM
I relate to your words Emile my friend. I will fav this one. Constant sorrow is debilitating in many ways. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, I agree, sorrow is debilitating in many ways...as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2023 3:11:00 PM
It is true what you say about grief, and you said it beautifully. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2023 3:27:00 PM
Thanks, Ann, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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