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Grey wolves Hunting prey Chase a lone deer Who moves with lightning speed ~ Escapes.
Written on 7th May 2019. For writing Challenge 1 May, Cinqku Poetry contest. Sponsored by Dear Heart. Theme Chosen number 3 animal.

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Date: 5/8/2022 2:40:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one and the positive ending for the deer but of course the wolves went away hungry but maybe they got food later on. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 5/8/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Sara, they wouldn't have gone hungry that's for sure, but I love to see their prey get away. Tom
Date: 5/6/2022 5:40:00 AM
The image and the words have captured a moment between life and death ! Glad life has won ! Powerful write, Tom
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Date: 5/6/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Valsa, I know we all have to eat to survive but I love to see animals get away from a predator. Tom
Date: 7/2/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hell Tom, I am so glad that the deer got away. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/3/2019 12:49:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I too love it when they escape. Tom
Date: 5/18/2019 5:42:00 PM
So glad he escaped, Tom! A great action-filled Cinqku! Congrats on your win! Sandra :)
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Date: 5/18/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra, I hope you're well. Tom
Date: 5/14/2019 9:54:00 AM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem. So happy the deer got away but also realize this is nature's way.
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Date: 5/14/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Dear Heart and also for hosting, I know wolves have to eat too but like you say its natures way when they are not so lucky. Tom
Date: 5/14/2019 3:38:00 AM
- Congratulations, Tom :) - hugs :)
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Date: 5/14/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine. Tom.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:38:00 AM
Many congrats for your wonderful Cinqku Tom, I seem to have missed it first time round! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/14/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Ann, happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 5/14/2019 3:00:00 AM
I loved this Tom. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/14/2019 3:08:00 AM
Thank you Very much Connie, I enjoyed this new form, a bit like a haiku. Tom
Date: 5/13/2019 6:37:00 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win Tom...
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Date: 5/14/2019 3:08:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. Tom
Date: 5/13/2019 6:26:00 PM
congrats for your win, Tom
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Date: 5/14/2019 3:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, Tom
Date: 5/11/2019 6:17:00 AM
Well written, Tom. I feel sorry for the deer, although even wolves have a right to eat and live! Would be fairer if it were one on one! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/11/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Paul, survival of the fittest for sure. Tom
Date: 5/11/2019 4:21:00 AM
Great Tom, you are such a talent Panagiota
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Date: 5/11/2019 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 5/10/2019 7:55:00 PM
A narrow escape!...Very nicely penned Tom..
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Date: 5/11/2019 2:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph. Tom.
Date: 5/10/2019 7:08:00 PM
A moment in time. What a tale the lone deer will tell.
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Date: 5/11/2019 2:40:00 AM
Thanks Kim, thankfully he lived to run another day. Tom
Date: 5/10/2019 3:32:00 PM
Your evocative poem is full of drama and movement. A beautiful piece, Tom. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/10/2019 4:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan, I'm happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 5/10/2019 8:36:00 AM
This is great, Tom. Best for a win...perfect photo too! Charlie
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Date: 5/10/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Charlie, have a great weekend. Tom.
Date: 5/10/2019 7:57:00 AM
Captivating action, exhilarating escape dear, Tom! I am running for European Parliament . I will be back after May 26th!
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Date: 5/10/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, and good luck, I.wish you all the best. Tom
Date: 5/9/2019 2:19:00 PM
So glad the deer escaped - I love watching national geographic programmes but always hate to see a kill! Good luck in the contest Tom - I forecast a win! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/9/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I always hope they get away, I was talking to someone at a lodge in Kenya and they said people get upset when the lions come to the water hole and make a kill but that's the sad side of nature I suppose. Tom
Date: 5/9/2019 4:23:00 AM
Great action Cinqku. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/9/2019 4:28:00 AM
Thank you M.L. Tom
Date: 5/8/2019 9:52:00 PM
This time! Great Poem Tom
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Date: 5/8/2019 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Timothy, when they're injured or old they become easy target's. Tom
Date: 5/8/2019 6:54:00 PM
So glad to see that deer escape Tom, a wonderful Cinqku, such imagery with a few lines. Good luck in the contest....Maria Hugs
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Date: 5/8/2019 11:58:00 PM
Thank you Maria, sometimes they live to run another day. Hope all's well. Tom
Date: 5/8/2019 6:51:00 PM
Perfect visual description of this natural event.
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Date: 5/8/2019 11:57:00 PM
Thank you very much W.A. Tom
Date: 5/8/2019 6:26:00 PM
Fantastic photo and beautiful poetry. I wish you well!
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Date: 5/8/2019 11:55:00 PM
Thank you Ralph. Tom
Date: 5/8/2019 4:08:00 PM
O, what a great entry for the contest! With a happy ending (for the deer)!
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Date: 5/8/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thank you P.S, I do love it when they escape sadly many do not. Tom
Date: 5/8/2019 3:31:00 PM
Excellent Tom! Fast and precise :)
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Date: 5/8/2019 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, hope you're well. Tom
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