Grey Skies Crying

The scarecrows stand dejected, as Day shrinks, and Night pervades. And Autumn inks colored leaves before Winter's cold invades. Trees blush scarlet and crimson, responding to Jack Frost's kiss. And, exhaled breaths of air, morph into fog; breezes dismiss. Rutting sets the bucks on edge, rivals clashing head-to-head. While a pungent odor lures, compliant does; to be bred. And the ground crackles, treading on newly dead and dying. And bare, skeletal branches, reach up to grey skies crying. Raindrops freeze into snowflakes, forming frozen puffs of cloud. And Autumn's stripped of color; wrapped in Winter's snow white shroud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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February 22, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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March 14, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile.
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March 14, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Juman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:13 PM
marvelous write--do check out mines and tell my what you think
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November 6, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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November 5, 2015 at 6:44 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
Pinet Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Thanks.
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November 5, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Fantastic, Emile! You've portrayed autumn's death and the birth of Winter in splendid fashion. A definite 7 and a fav.
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November 5, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your encouraging visits. Emile.
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