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Grey Rabbit White Paper

Grey rabbit... White paper... I am the grey rabbit Snared, trapped by restrictive wires Unseen I reach for the quill of significance Yet she teases Just a tug too far Ink wells spilt upon verde grass Parchment paper Leaves me parched I cannot paint nor write My fluffy tails lost it's sheen I'm off down the burrow To lick my wounds And Ensure my hovels clean

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/13/2012 5:44:00 PM
You have such an interesting and creative style. I'm not good at this kind of free verse but I enjoy reading it the way you do it!
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Karen Deeks
Date: 6/13/2012 5:45:00 PM
thank you that really is a compliment... karen
Date: 6/4/2012 4:36:00 PM
Hi,Karen i think your poem is cool LOL Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }!{
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Karen Deeks
Date: 6/5/2012 3:06:00 AM
Hello sylvia... tyvm for reading my write and liking it...karen :)