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Grey Old Men of the North

Grey clouds crept in like old men White beards puffed and swollen The wind at first came in whispers Then cooled and fought like sisters About the air all sharp and raw Lashed the cheek with taloned claw And along these tree lined halls The clouds cough and snow it falls And in no time all was bright As if the artist had spilt his white Tottering knee deep in cotton wool On virgin ground my footsteps pull Now eased and clouds withdrawn From natures rage peace is born The pitter patter of melting snow The sun its flexing muscles show Life proceeds amidst the glow As nature loves all will grow All was there then all was gone My dogs and I we walked as one Yet vivid thoughts still remain When from the north the old men came Showed their might and staked their claim

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2010 5:10:00 PM
You have such wonderful descriptions in all your poems...how can you think of all these things...lol...Beautiful and enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poem this morning Daniel. Thank you for posting and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:47:00 AM
So many things go through your mind as you walk through the snow with your dogs, Daniel. I hope the snow continues to melt and spring comes early. I think the "old men" would welcome it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:24:00 AM
Enjoyed the scene!
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:19:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive but possibly a thread of something else in there. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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