Grey Diamond

There was a young jockey from Ireland 
Booked to ride the race horse, grey diamond
he wanted to be seen
painted grey diamond green
and kissed the Blarney Stone for Ireland.

15/03/2017.
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Martin Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Love the Limerick and the picture. Would make racing interesting to colour all the horses, but i suspect there might be a few objections. Congratulations on your win Roy! :-)
Pett Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Thank you very much Mark for your very kind comment on this fun write much appreciated.
Bose Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Funny, Roy. I guess you've given us a new twist on "racing colors". Churchill Downs may never be the same ... Thanks, Dave
Pett Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment David, I have never been to Churchill Downs but from pictures and film it looks a wonderful place to visit especially for the Kentucky Derby, thanks again, Roy. :))
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Great job, Roy, and congrats for your win. It would be fun to see that green horse.
Pett Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 3:11 AM
Thank you very much Andrea so pleased you liked this Limerick, I have bet many race horses that are green ( a race horse that has no idea how to race ) thanks again, Roy. :))
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Thank you very much Jan, very pleased with this, Roy. :))
Krampe Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Congrats on your win, Roy.
Pett Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Thank you very much Agnes for your very kind congratulations and support, Roy. :)))
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:27 AM
Now that's a horse of a different color! (Wizard of Oz reference :) Congrats, Roy!
Pett Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Thank you very much Kim, so pleased at this being placed, thought it was an outsider and needed a wizard to get it placed ha ha, Roy. :)))
Kimathi Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:51 AM
Congrats Roy, for your WIN with this awesome piece!! ;-)
Pett Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Thank you very much Teddy, so pleased on being placed, Roy. :)))
Godwin Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 12:46 AM
A clever one, most witty and certainly a grin maker! All the best ... CayCay
Pett Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 3:44 AM
Thank you very much CayCay, so pleased you liked this fun write, I really appreciate your support, Roy, :)
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Witty, and with an original flavour, Roy! Wait till you win....all the others will be green with envy!:) Regards // paul
Pett Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thank you very much Paul, I am sure this is a rank outsider, but thanks for you very kind comment much appreciated, Roy. :))
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:24 PM
wow, fantastic one, Roy. For sure a winner
Pett Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:54 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, they never win if I pick them never mind what colour, thanks again, Roy.
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Very clever limerick Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 12:58 PM
Thank you very much Jan, your too kind, wishing you a happy st. Patrick's day, Roy. :))
Melugin Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Roy, very nice indeed! Go Irish! Green is great! My best to you, chuck
Pett Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Thank you very much Chuck, wishing you a happy st. Patrick's day, Roy. :))
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