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Green Pavilions

What mystery lies
Deep in pavilions green
Draped in sunbeams bright

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Harry Horsman

January 21, 2013 at 7:25 AM

wow i'm sure glad i found this, amazing imagery ....

James Marshall Goff

December 23, 2009 at 9:38 PM

love what this fine poem gives the reader to carry-on with! imaginative and very creative! Audrey! CONGRATS! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 22, 2009 at 11:07 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Audrey. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

December 21, 2009 at 10:06 PM

Great Haiku, Audrey. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Love Lainie

John Freeman

December 21, 2009 at 12:45 PM

Congratulations poem gone to 2nt round Audrey. A server error came up on your soup message. Your message " Merry Christmas" came thru, tho. Merry Christmas to you also, sincerely, Love, Moses

P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 8:27 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Brian Strand

December 21, 2009 at 12:31 AM

Congrats on you first round contest success Audrey.Rgds Brian

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 20, 2009 at 2:59 PM

Wonderful imagery with this haiku, Audrey :) Congrats on getting through the 1st round :) Wish you all the best

Carolyn Devonshire

December 20, 2009 at 1:05 PM

Congratulations on moving to the next round with your wonderful haiku, Audrey! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

December 20, 2009 at 9:38 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Audrey >> James

Nicole Sharon Brown

October 24, 2009 at 11:35 AM

great write! congratulations on the feature tthis week!

Sue Mason

October 24, 2009 at 9:57 AM

For some reason my mind has gone to the Mayan ruins with this one ... smile ... a powerful little haiku here, Audrey. Just a suggestion: a question mark at the end would add even more mystery!! ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being featured this week at the Soup!!

Elaine George

October 22, 2009 at 11:48 AM

Wonderful Haiku, Audrey. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

James Fraser

October 19, 2009 at 10:38 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Audrey >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 18, 2009 at 5:03 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Audrey. Love, Carol

James Fraser

October 17, 2009 at 11:02 AM

Terrific Haiku >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 8, 2009 at 12:12 PM

Another awesome write Audrey. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

October 7, 2009 at 8:25 AM

Beautiful haiku! Just stopping by to thank you for your lovely comment! Warmest wishes. Love, shar

Moonbee Canady

September 26, 2009 at 3:29 PM

Audrey... You Are So Gifted... I Love This Poem... It takes me away to the deep Forest, where Sunbeams slant through the Tall Trees... Your Three Lines is A Mind-Fantasy-Escape... Like A Short Movie.... Going into my Fav's MoonBee