Anindya Mohan Tagore Poet Free verse

Green - I Have Seen You Somewhere Within

Green - I have seen you somewhere within my evergreen soul
Where the Omniscient plays his flute
To rejuvenate the tired ones - scattered by the humdrum of daily chores
His idiosyncratic tune soothes my heart

Green - I have seen you somewhere within the desolated dry lands
Where you assure us of a definite return
Spiralling with the next rain to come - with the seeds of new love
Sprouting with our endless hopes - in the hands of caressing farmers
Farmers of life too

Green - I have seen you somewhere within the falling leaves
Burnt by the desires of their own - dejected souls
Still they fall on the ground from where they got nourishment
Mix them with their mother to make her fertile
To maintain the perpetual flow of love
To the next progeny

An evergreen dream
Comes true
Green - I have seen you somewhere within ... 
My desperate hopes


01.03.16

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Teddy Kimathi May 6, 2016 at 11:08 AM Greetings Anindya. Congrats for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Casarah Nance May 4, 2016 at 10:03 PM I like the repetition of the line "Green-I have seen you somewhere within..." Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing it as your favorite write.

Manmath Dalei April 2, 2016 at 12:41 PM Awesome presentation with Indian touch. Very impressive. Nice ending......hugs Anindya Mohan Tagore April 3, 2016 at 8:28 AM Thank you, Manmath. Hugs, Bobby

Teddy Kimathi April 1, 2016 at 8:05 AM You have brought a new aura of creativity to Poetry Soup!!!! Congrats Anindya, for your first placement in the contest!!! ;-) Anindya Mohan Tagore April 3, 2016 at 8:28 AM Truly humbled. Thanks Teddy. Hugs, Bobby

Charlie Smith March 30, 2016 at 3:01 PM Great write! Great win! congratulations Anindya... Anindya Mohan Tagore April 3, 2016 at 8:25 AM Thanks a lot Charlie. Hugs, Bobby

Anisha Dutta March 28, 2016 at 12:51 AM Great Congrats Anindya to win the top place. Best Wishes. Anisha D Anindya Mohan Tagore March 30, 2016 at 11:15 AM Thank you dear Didi. Hugs, Bobby

Suzanne Delaney March 27, 2016 at 4:53 PM Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem. A definite Fav for me. SuZ Anindya Mohan Tagore March 30, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thank you dear, Suzanne. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven March 27, 2016 at 2:39 PM Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your dream of green just makes such beautiful images float through my mind. The words just flowed from the start to the finish Bobby. This is excellent poetry. This write deserves the highest rating so a seven is given my friend and it definitely goes into my faves....Vlad. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 30, 2016 at 11:13 AM Thank you dear, Vlad. I am humbled. Hugs, Bobby

Brian Davey March 27, 2016 at 5:51 AM Congratulations on your first placement in this contest, well deserved Anindya Mohan Tagore March 27, 2016 at 9:10 AM Thank you so very much, Brian. Hugs, Bobby

Probir Gupta March 27, 2016 at 4:49 AM An evergreen feeling conveyed to all readers. Great indeed. Congratulations to the green for the befitting win... Anindya Mohan Tagore March 27, 2016 at 9:09 AM Thank you, Sir. I am humbled. Respectful greetings, Bobby

Connie Marcum Wong March 27, 2016 at 4:07 AM Congratulations Bobby on your deserving first place. Your poem is exquisite! #7 Going into my faves! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 27, 2016 at 9:08 AM Thank you so very much, Connie, for your continuous support and love. Feeling honoured and blessed. Hugs, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2016 at 1:09 AM Hello Bobby, thank you for sharing your green poem in my going green contest. Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Anindya Mohan Tagore March 27, 2016 at 9:05 AM How do I thank thee? Let me count the ways... Haha! You know Linda, if I meet you someday somewhere in this world, I am gonna give you a real tight hug. XX, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 10:53 PM Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA Anindya Mohan Tagore March 27, 2016 at 8:58 AM XOXO, Bobby

Elaine George March 3, 2016 at 5:50 AM I really like your take on this, Anindya. Many congrats on your win. Elaine Anindya Mohan Tagore March 3, 2016 at 11:01 AM So nice of you, Elaine. Happy to know that you liked it. Thanks for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Joseph May March 2, 2016 at 10:17 PM Congrats on a great win Anindya Mohan Tagore March 3, 2016 at 4:44 AM Thank you, Joseph. Hugs, Bobby

Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 9:37 PM Bobby, I really like where you went with this theme, congratulations on your wonderfully penned write, I am loving this 7 ~ Anindya Mohan Tagore March 3, 2016 at 4:44 AM Truly honoured, Constance. Thanks for your visit and beautiful compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Eve Roper March 2, 2016 at 7:23 PM Anindya, congratulations on your win in the contest. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 3, 2016 at 4:42 AM Thanks a lot,Eve. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven March 2, 2016 at 5:47 PM Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Loved the write....Vlad. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 3, 2016 at 4:41 AM Hello Vlad, Thanks a lot for your visit and likings. Hugs, Bobby

Beautiful Scars March 2, 2016 at 3:23 PM Anindya, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo Anindya Mohan Tagore March 3, 2016 at 3:34 AM Thanks a lot, Luloo. Hugs, Bobby

Sandra Haight March 2, 2016 at 8:03 AM Such a beautiful poem, Bobby, with lovely, soulful tributes to the color green. I wish you all the best for the contest. Sandra Anindya Mohan Tagore March 2, 2016 at 8:25 AM Truly honoured, Sandra. Thank you for your visit and encouraging comments. When I joined Poetry Soup, just six months back, I never thought I would get so much love and encouragement from here. Hugs, Bobby