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Green Fruit

Green Fruit

In the jar, 
the cucumbers are pickling. 
Grandma put them there, 
days ago. 

Slowly... 
They are getting more tart, 
more smart, 
and will fart, 
before the end. 

What? 

I love pickles, 
they make me smile. 
They make my taste buds go pop. 
I love the really vicious ones, 
that leave you touching your tongue
to the roof of your mouth, 
for at least ten minutes too. 
Those are the hot ones. 
Grandpa calls them, "fire in a jar". 

Fancy fruits put away
for another day, 
barely make it through today... 
if I am around. 
Just saying.
 
Pickles.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Canerdy Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:57 PM
Very descriptive and entertaining, Ann. Janice
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:29 PM
I myself am not a 'fire-eater.' lol. But nothing beats a (moderately) sour pickle!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:18 PM
This made me smile"I love the really vicious ones, that leave you touching your tongue to the roof of your mouth, for at least ten minutes too. Those are the hot ones. Grandpa calls them, "fire in a jar". " So great!
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 1:05 PM
This is MY kind of free verse. Not the surreal crap so famous in the modern world today Just something anyone can relate to!!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Fun! Getting more tart, more smart, will fart…lol! Love the “fire in a jar.” Sounds scrumptious!
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