Green Eyed Monster

I had some extra green paint
Oh what can I do to make her faint
So a dabbed a bit down below
When in the room she came for a blow
I yelled 
Green-eyed monster is waiting to show


She fainted

Notes:
ok ok I saw so many poems with this topic, I said what the hell, why not!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jerden Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 7:19 AM
I think you need to get that looked at. It seems to have gone a bit off. Good one! Cheers, Roy
Babcock Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 11:34 AM
Love the humor in this. love phyl
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, a bit risque but I could not resist!
Callus Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Like your humour, Arthur!!! Are you sure her reaction was all due to the colour!:) // paul
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:47 PM
LOL Paul!!! Cheers
Williams Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Hello Arthur now this is close to the bone ha ha....nice to read your work again...David
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:46 PM
LOL David, funny, nice to see you here, and I hope you will not be a stranger! Good to see you again!
Chircop Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 1:16 PM
: )..What did you eat for dinner to be inspiredin such a way : ).Lol!
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:45 PM
More like what was I drinking!!!! :)
Mcdaid Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:47 PM
smiling really enjoyable vision painted arthur
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:44 PM
Thank you lian, laughter is always a winner!
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:36 AM
oh boy oh boy oh boy. hahaha
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:43 PM
That's what she said too!!!!! ( before she fainted )
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:58 AM
lol - why not indeed soup could do with a huge injection of humour! Hugs jan xxx
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:42 PM
Laughter makes the world go round! Sadness makes the poet drown.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Well that's witty Arthur! Fun real fun!
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 10:42 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma A. Sharma!
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