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Green Apples Lovely… not yet ripe, sweet fruit from grandma’s… most favorite tree. She planted it… just for me. When I was born, my mama died. It was a hard time… for papa. He could not understand… how one angel, must be traded, for another. Always I saw it in his eyes, the “less than” look. I am so sorry… my mama’s gone. Yet… she told me a secret… It was passed in beats, of joyful hearts, both new and old, fast and slow, happy and sad, even sweet… and glad. Grandpa, never listened. So I loved him anyway, from that first day, until the last.

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Date: 12/29/2020 2:05:00 PM
Ahhh!! This is very expressive and emotive work. I can imagine that it would be hard on a father and grandfather to loose a daughter while giving birth to a child. I hope they worked it out soon for your benefit. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/27/2020 6:35:00 PM
A bittersweet tear-jerker, you've lived and written, Ann. Here's to happier days, Gershon
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