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Written - 30th September 2023
Gnarled, Gracious, Green, Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st placement 

 

Love is like the green, green grass of home, in heart and mind where’er one may roam.
Quote - Poet’s own.
The lady loved to roam in moonlight’s kiss searching for romance and magical bliss Her heart a flaming inferno of fire hot-blooded intensity of desire. Stalking around in dark shadows of the night beneath the moon and silvery starlight With flirtatious purpose kept under wrap enticing lovers to enter her trap. An irresistible web she would weave for those foolish hearts willingly deceived Alluring beauty attracted her prey once bitten there'd be no getting away. Emerald green eyes, dark lashes flashing ruby red lips pouting at those passing Tresses tumbling down, a golden headdress a velvet wrap to embrace her finesse. She walked with lithe grace of a feline cat purring softly when someone made contact Pulling them in with each trick in the book making sure intentions where understood. She'd love and leave them with no afterthought too many to count, lovers by the score No one ever asked, they just wondered why she lived as she did till the day she died. Her spirit lives on in a twinkling star looking out for lovers where'er they are Still as exquisite, still in love with love arranging love affairs from up above. Princess of love, many hearts she melted when she walked planet earth in green velvet.

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Date: 10/12/2023 11:21:00 AM
Belle, you've served up a great dish of 'gothicness' with your poetry here. Belated congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. It's a great read. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 10/8/2023 11:23:00 PM
Belle, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your quote and image, Constance
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/9/2023 12:36:00 AM
Thank you Constance, I enjoyed entering your contest and I’m delighted with the win. Belle
Date: 10/8/2023 2:26:00 AM
Spooky write Belle, gave me the chills!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2023 7:00:00 AM
Hi BJ, when I read this myself I find it spooky too, but then it’s all only make believe. Thank you, Belle
Date: 10/4/2023 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Belle! I love your rhythm and words of course; I love your green goddess feme fatal! "Princess of love, many hearts she melted when she walked planet earth in green velvet" so precious, I am going to fav it. xo
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/5/2023 12:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Anaya, I’m thrilled with the win, that you liked this poem and for you having faved it… Belle, xo
Date: 10/3/2023 3:33:00 AM
Whoa!! That lady of the night was really a temptress with evil in her veins. Your work has good flow, rhythm and rhyme. Way to go for the contest or I thought I saw one where the word green was in the running. It reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/3/2023 11:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, sincerely appreciated…Belle
Date: 10/2/2023 10:21:00 AM
Simply a marvellous poem, which abounds in imagery. One of course must beware of those bewitching eyes. She weaves a subtle wed. Beware. Blessings.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/2/2023 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Victor, one should beware of ladies that roam streets at night alone wearing a long green velvet robe… Belle
Date: 10/2/2023 6:41:00 AM
“ her spirit lives on in a twinkling star” wow! What a heartfelt and moving take this is, I absolutely love the flow of this and also your quote too, is brilliant! Poignant poem you’ve delivered very creatively! Pleasure reading this one for green. Goodluck for the contest
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/2/2023 11:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink, I’m delighted to receive your kind words and very pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle
Date: 10/1/2023 5:23:00 AM
A beautiful take on the theme. Your words paint her portrait perfectly, Belle.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/1/2023 5:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, so nice of you… Belle
Date: 9/30/2023 6:58:00 PM
Wow! Belle, You penned such a well-written entry using the word green. Your content, imagery, and rhymes are good. You had me at “ searching for romance and magical bliss”. This is my kind of story! Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexus
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/30/2023 7:24:00 PM
Alexis, I’m so pleased you liked this, thank you for such an encouraging review :-) Belle
Date: 9/30/2023 2:09:00 PM
Wow! I'm genuinely impressed with your creation. The imagery is outstanding as are your rhymes. I could envision the temptress, the lady in green. Well done, Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/30/2023 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Sara, I’m truly grateful for your appraisal… Belle
Date: 9/30/2023 9:58:00 AM
You draw us in with impeccable imagery! Wow!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/30/2023 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim, I’m truly grateful for thst… Belle
Date: 9/30/2023 7:12:00 AM
Such an interesting take on the theme 'Green' dear Belle. Enjoyed reading the story you weaved in rhyme... Best wishes in the contest. Hope you are doing great. Hugs... ~ Ani
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/30/2023 9:17:00 AM
Thank you Anitha, doing well and hope you are too… Belle
Date: 9/30/2023 2:18:00 AM
A touching and beautiful poem... is it fictional? Is it someone you knew? As always your rhyme and flow so well. This is an excellent poem for the contest..
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/30/2023 2:59:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed Silent One, the poem is fictional… Belle
Date: 9/29/2023 9:47:00 PM
Wow. This is fantastic! You have a gift with words that captures our attention. Best wishes for the contest!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 10:37:00 AM
You're welcome and I'm back to say yay u won first place! Congrats!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/30/2023 12:59:00 AM
Thank you Karen, those words are truly heartfelt and very much appreciated… Belle

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