Andrea Dietrich Poet Senryu

Greek Gods Still Exist

Andrea Dietrich

someone watching me -
hypnotic brown eyes were proof. . . . 
Greek gods still exist

mere mortal was I
penetrated by his gaze 
how could I resist?

goddess for one night -
my face by his eyes and lips
adoringly kissed

for "Eyes First Meet" Contest *********3 Senryu's Only
Sponsored by Michael M. Falotico

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Jon A Cavanaugh November 7, 2013 at 7:14 AM Well done. and another winner.

Jack Horne September 30, 2011 at 10:20 AM I see that every time we post a new poem, an oldie gets shoved off into oblivion, LOL. This is your oldest now. I don't remember this beauty. And beautiful it is : )

Judy Konos April 18, 2011 at 9:25 AM Girl! I am reading your poetry and it is fantastic. Girl! so many people reading your poetry....Congratulations....I may only disagree with this particular poem as I am married to one of those Greek Gods you speak of....lol.. so I won't let him see this as I will never get his head to shrink back to normal! Thanks again....Judy

James Foulk April 11, 2011 at 8:35 PM thank you for reading my poetry and for your support.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 4, 2011 at 1:10 PM Hope all is well Andrea and u are doing wonderful ... hope u get back to souping soon luv... missing ya much my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:47 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:27 PM love it, nice rhyming scheme , congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:11 PM Congratulations Goddess Andrea, on your win in MJF's contest.. Hope your weekend's been a good one especially with it being a busy one as well.. love Wilma

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 6:27 AM Congrats Andrea on your win with this wonderful write!---kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 2, 2011 at 5:19 AM thankxx Andrea for your wonderful words on my Family Forever.. as u know my family means everything to me ..much as my faith and trust in God.. appreciate u enjoying it .. as I consistently luv your poetry..too..luv..

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 2:25 AM Oh Andrea, i think you are still a Goddess, a Goddess of words, love this sensuous poem. congrats. Harry

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 1:51 AM Positively lovely Andrea. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie.

Gautami Phookan April 2, 2011 at 1:29 AM Congratulations on your super win Andrea. Lovely hypnotic poesy..Love Gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 2, 2011 at 12:01 AM knew this Greek god would be a winner sweetie ;) super congrats on your win :D --maybe you're asleep already? hugs to you :)

Tahera Mannan April 1, 2011 at 9:40 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Andrea.

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 6:03 PM Congratulations Andrea on your nice win in the contest. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 4:16 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Nicole Hawkins April 1, 2011 at 3:34 PM Very Nice Andrea, congratulations on your win :) -Nicole

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:15 PM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Michael, Andrea

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 2:57 PM oh, andie girl.. that guy somehting should be flattered, lol... a redhot congrats for winning a super slot in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 2:56 PM Congratulations on your amazing win in Michael's Contest, Andrea! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:37 PM Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest, Andrea! Way to go... Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:23 PM COngrats Andrea on your win in my contest and all your sweet commments this past week..love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:22 PM Congrats Andrea on your super win of 5th place in Michael's contest with this exciting entry my friend.. another chart topping win so well deserved with luv..

Shivagamy Palanichamy March 29, 2011 at 10:51 PM good work andrea ...

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