Greatest Poem Ever.

I called this greatest poem ever
cause I knew the name would make you read
so keep it coming, keep it coming 
I need more views please

Sorry if I lack my usual,
thoughts filled with emotion
but even now with lighter notes,
I have filled my purpose

It may not be very deep
with words that make you weep
but the title's very catchy
that may be all you care to see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your win.Sara
Fraser Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Well said Jordan, clever little luring rhyme you have written. Many congratualtions on your win in the contest >> James
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:19 AM
too funny, the titles for me are usually the hardest part, but I won't steal yours, congrats on your HM in the contest
Gorelick Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:07 AM
Coongrats to you Jordan..You make a good point about the Title we give to poems.. Im not very good at that. BG
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's Contest Jordan. Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Congrats Jordan on your HM in HG's contest on comments and views.. an awesome entry .. enjoy a special honor all your own today with lots of luv..
Effendi Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Lolz.... Rohini did better rhyme than you Jordan my pal:D I'll rate it 6!
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