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Great Wall of China and Then Some

Block by block it starts to rise, Great Wall of China begins, A barrier to stem the horde, marauding Mongolians, Must be bigger and better, than ever attempted before, Also should be breathtaking, far into the clouds will soar. Where on earth do we start, going be thousands of miles long, Everywhere at once, of course, otherwise it’d all go wrong, Need to find lot’s of workers, ten million on the ground, This is China, unlimited manpower, labour forces abound. Build a wall upon mountain ridges, never been tried before, Yeah it’s a pickle ok, most shall die, replaced by millions more, Emperor decrees, “Thy Will Be Done” no matter what it takes, Nothing can impede our way, even the country’s deepest lakes. So onwards and upwards it goes, for better or maybe worse, Now he demands a road atop, for soldiers to ride their horse, Crowning glory, the beacon towers, seen from all around, These almighty fires, warn our armies, from hilltops to town. Like most things in life, comes with a double edged sword, So ulterior motive triumphs, for planners and overlords, Even back then, a master stroke, laughs Dynasty of the Ming, By keeping invaders out, our slaves imprison themselves within. Best N-A poem of 2020 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton 13/01/21 N/A COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(38) any theme any form Brian Strand 12/3/2020 12:00:00 AM 11/5/2020 1:08

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Date: 6/15/2020 2:55:00 PM
David I watched a documentary on T.V a while back on BBC i think called Great Wall of China Silent Odysey It was fantastic this reminded me of it
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2020 1:21:00 PM
Thanks for the heads up Christopher I’m fascinated with good historical documentaries get some great repeats on BBC4 I’ll keep an eye out cheers David
Date: 1/1/2020 11:16:00 PM
Nice poem.. The efforts and sufferings behind every monument is a big subject to discuss.. Thanks for sharing..
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2020 8:35:00 AM
Thank you for kind comments I always try think of the cost to the small man behind the big projects Cheers David

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