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This is just a poem..I think that the form of government that we have is the best that has ever been but it is not perfect..That will happen when Jesus rules and reigns on earth..

Great Government Recreate

Boredom, disgust, hearing lies Political debates wait One is good as the other guys Great government recreate Contest: Chastushka Form/Russian Poetry Sponsor: Gwendolen Rix Click on "About This Poem"
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Maverick Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 3:02 PM
I have read the ( about this poem ) Sara and i wonder,, maybe you are right.? it just seems that on one level,, there is such technology.. i e" the writing on a corn-flake packet can be read clearly from outer space (mind you this was in the late 70s..! i wonder what they can do now..? yet Saddam Hussain was supposed to have atomic weapons in trucks that could not be traced..? or found..no.. it does not add up..! "however enjoyed the read" yours Joe..
Horne Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Yes, so true here too. Love this piece, Sara. Did I congratulate you on your wins? I'm getting forgetful in my old age, LOL. Many congrats on your wins : )
Wesley Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:36 PM
A great rant and entry Sara, best of luck in the contest.
Lefanue Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:15 AM
Dear Sara, Many thanks for your kind comment re my poem. I enjoyed your poem "Great Government Recreate" - Good luck in Gwendolen's Contest! Luv, Maureen
B Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Some lot we have this go round eh? I'll have to vomit no matter what. True enough what you say in your about this poem section, but will we be keeping this form? And *taps foot* I kinda wish he would return to reign :) Well said though Mrs. Sara and good luck in the contest.
Merryman Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Good one, Sara. Love, Kim
Sivey Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 5:09 PM
What a fabulous write my friend! This poem was very illuminating to me! Good doing! Awesome Work!!
Goller Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 4:44 PM
I agree with you, government say everything to their advantage.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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February 16, 2012 at 4:03 PM
You are really into these chastushka poems Gwen. This is another good one.
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