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Great Escape

Grinding the nine to five every day Relying on, needing that big pay Everyone’s demands, they want a part Always stressed even when you start Trust that you really need to depart Exiting ever so graciously today Somewhere nice to get away Canceled your normal work plan Accept that it’s OK, you really can Pack quickly for your island getaway Enjoy your much-needed time away 1/11/20 Contest: Great escape poetry contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/18/2020 7:28:00 PM

Woo-Hoo and Conratulations Tania. Panagiota

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/19/2020 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota, hugs!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/15/2020 11:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Tania..

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/16/2020 4:38:00 AM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2020 6:20:00 PM

yes we both chose to getaway and got the same placement lol:-) well done Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2020 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Jan! hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/15/2020 5:10:00 PM

An escape from work rejuvenates body and mind! A great entry Tania. Congratulations on your win! xxoo

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2020 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Connie!

John Hamilton

Date: 1/15/2020 2:46:00 PM

What a nice down to earth write Tania, congrats on a fine placement and thanks for entering!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2020 4:28:00 PM

Thanks you John for your comments and my placement in your contest!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2020 10:20:00 AM

It feels so real life, Tania--everyone can relate to your theme--the sights and sounds of daily life resonate along with the plans for island getaway.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/13/2020 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Vijay!

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/13/2020 2:35:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. God bless you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/13/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you Beata!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/12/2020 7:27:00 AM

This acrostic is very well done, Tania. Janice

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/12/2020 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Janice!