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Grayed Sorrow Surrounds Me

Grayed swell Foamed chop thrashes the rocks The wind scatters the seabirds above Their aerial skills flustered with rush Gloomy skies deter natures light Each cloud acting as a closing door As i sit and look out Beside me, raven of doom As it hangs its head Knowing my loved one has been consumed In my heart i pray A cloud relaxes and a ray of hope shines through Until then i sit Sodden with grief My upbringing My belief http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss2.php

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Date: 12/10/2014 6:24:00 AM
the mood plus the scenery you displayed intesifies the melancjolic rhythmn
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James Fraser
Date: 12/10/2014 12:20:00 PM
From my collection of Dark Poetry, of which I've written quite a few - James :)x
Date: 6/29/2009 12:30:00 PM
The sea birds and the gray give motion, color and sound to this piece. Nicely conceived, Jim. daver
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Date: 6/27/2009 3:16:00 PM
Love the creativity and meleoncholy of this piece, May your creative branches offer you another limb to climb on and let your pen take you to new heights.
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