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Gray Stillness

The still clouds across the pasture hugging the mountains, did not stir A blanket of gray, everywhere brought peace to a soul that is bare Gray stillness stopped time in a beat There is nothing left to defeat Only wisdom to know it's time It will all begin with this rhyme Heidi Sands 3/25/25 *8 Syllables (C)opyright

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Date: 3/26/2025 8:13:00 AM
brought peace to a soul that is bare Enjoyed the poem and loved that line
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2025 8:29:00 AM
Thank you very much William :)
Date: 3/26/2025 2:45:00 AM
- "There is nothing left to defeat" ... just to enjoy, Heidi :) - Lovely written :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2025 5:07:00 AM
Yes. Thank you Anne - Lise. I hope you have a great day . Hugs :)
Date: 3/25/2025 8:17:00 PM
Submitted 3/25/25
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