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Gravity

High tides and low tides rise and recede, recede and rise from my deeps in desperation, as he pulls me in day out, day in. I cradle an ocean inside. I see him at eventide, though we stay connected day and night. He orbits me perfectly like a devotee! There’s still a surge, an urge in my bosom; pining at its peak as he hides himself. Another apex when he’s aglow well-rounded in beauty, in love, though perched afar yet. Alas!! As my waves crash ashore, they make music, fine verses, you hear, you admire. I go on fire between the lines drawn in from GRAVITY.

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Date: 1/27/2022 10:00:00 AM
Lovely flow, Harpreet like your "ocean inside." Your words splash and flow, crash ashore "between the lines." I have read GRAVITY several times and each time I see something different! That is a poetic gift. Thank you for this journey into your waves. All the best.
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Harpreet Kaur
Date: 1/29/2022 4:27:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging feedback. It means a lot! I am glad you were able to gather your treasure "between the lines".
Date: 5/30/2021 1:36:00 PM
Very poetic and interesting write, Harpreet. Thanks for visiting me recently. I can't seem to catch up to poets who have commented to me!!
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