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darkness descends, moss riddled with severed logs — verity of the fall 6/24/2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 6:56:00 AM
Impressive Monoku, my friend, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you kindly, dear Demetrios!
Date: 6/25/2018 6:45:00 AM
I am seeing many poems about autumn all of a sudden. Nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2018 7:52:00 AM
Actually this one has to do with the falling of my tree
Date: 6/25/2018 6:39:00 AM
Kim, I can visualize that gravitational pull!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2018 7:53:00 AM
Pulled by the storm.

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