Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Free verse

Graveyard Ride

My first intent to write a Halloween horror story 

October 31
12:00 a.m.

A young couple called Marien and Steven were walking nearby an abandoned cemetery.  Full moon light was shining through the dark clouds. The sound of an owl was heard in a dry tree that stood in the entrance of the cemetery.

Suddenly, a cold air was felt in the atmosphere.  A mist came from the graveyards. For the shock of Marien and Steven, corpses were coming out from the tombs.  They started to run.  Survival was on jeopardy.

Zombies were approaching Marien and Steven. A Halloween party was celebrated in a swimming pool of the neighborhood. Corpses started to fell in the pool. For the surprise of Marien and Steven, a TV reality show was filmed. All the events were a big joke.

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Robert Pettit October 29, 2015 at 12:31 PM It reads as if you are describing the 1968 cult classic film "Night of the Living Dead". That film was made for about $10,000 dollars, but remains immensely popular; especially around every Halloween. Good write. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 29, 2015 at 1:57 PM Good comparison. Thank you Robert.

Constance La France October 29, 2015 at 11:42 AM Nayda, you did well for a first attempt, quite creepy and then that twist at the end ~ Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 29, 2015 at 12:05 PM Thank you very much Broken Wings.

Kathie Shank October 29, 2015 at 11:40 AM Great short story. I loved the surprise ending. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 29, 2015 at 12:01 PM Thank you very much Kathie.