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Graveyard of the Leaves

Beneath each slender limb and bough
Are beds of russet silken cloths
Discarded leaflets from their home
Like orphans left to die alone

As rumors spread by autumn wind
She'll gather up each orphan, gold
No headstone for the bold and rust
Cold ash to ash... will turn to dust

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Contest: #213 Sponsored by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 7:20 PM
this is fantastic imagery of autumn leaves, CArrie. I love it, and a big congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this beautiful poem ~
Scars Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:01 PM
sweet Carrie, this is amazing...My fave in the contest-you are so gifted!! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 9:25 AM
A 7 for your beautiful WINNING poem, Carrie! Janice
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November 10, 2009 at 6:08 PM
Why Carrie,...your poetry is something to be desired,..this one really made mine mind expand !!! TY I just loved it,...into mine Favs friend !!! james
Austin Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 5:06 AM
"AS rumors heard by autumn wind." I love this line. Great seasonal piece. Love, daver
George   Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 1:50 PM
metaphorical masterpiece here, Carrie. love, lainie
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 4:18 AM
I enjoyed reading thank you Carrie. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2009 at 6:30 PM
Oooh! Just fantastic, Carrie! I love this! The last two lines wrap it up perfectly. Hugs, Donna
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November 7, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Excellent free verse, Carrie.. very descriptive choice of words.. enjoyed immensely ... thankxxx for liking Gumbo Soup... Izzy is a dear ... eventually will try to create a poem for each member who has been kind to me as a little reward for being so nice .. and welcoming.. have my list..to work with... enjoy rest of your weekend.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 7, 2009 at 12:24 PM
ashes to ashes ,dust to dust--all for the ants:)Carrie,,tnks for reminding me,so i lie life to the full--Charma
Goff Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 10:21 AM
really makes me contemplate my life...... wow! strong metaphors! Carrie! humans need love.....good work! jimbo
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