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Footprints fade away, doves stand guard leaving a blue sky with a hint of gray shadows dance across marble stones from naked limbs bodies shiver, eyes stare minds yearn to remember, hearts quiver for the dead have no concern though their names are etched in stone to remember their footprints as they fade away Marble stones too will fade along with the doves, as well as every memory With each fading footprint comes a moment of silence bringing knowledge of our own fate a marker of our mortality... so we cling to it like shadows dancing across the marble stones a visitor holding dead flowers to lay in memory leaving a blue sky with a hint of gray that brings shadows to an empty field of fading stones 9/15/17 contest Poems that paint a picture-2

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Date: 9/23/2017 9:26:00 PM
Wonderful free verse Frederick, I a believer in your free verse, I always thought of you as a sonnet writer, but I see you are very versatile, another fine win!
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:21:00 PM
Back to offer my congratulations Frederic on your fine win with this amazing poem.
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:48:00 PM
congratulations Frederick
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Date: 9/20/2017 1:07:00 PM
Frederic, so sad and beautiful... CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations Frederic! :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:10:00 AM
Haunting write Frederic and a great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:02:00 PM
you warm my heart by allowing yourself to give a voice to the venerable meaning of honoring those who have gone to rest... so beautiful, frederick..huggs
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Date: 9/15/2017 7:59:00 PM
Very well done Frederic. Amazing lines with great imagery; 'for the dead have no concern though their names are etched in stone to remember their footprints as they fade away', poetic bliss. Good luck in contest!
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