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Gravestones

Footprints fade away,  doves stand guard
leaving a blue sky with a hint of gray
shadows dance across marble stones
from naked limbs
bodies shiver, eyes stare
minds yearn to remember,  hearts quiver
for the dead have no concern
though their names are etched in stone
to remember their footprints as they fade away

Marble stones too will fade
along with the doves, as well as every memory

With each fading footprint
comes a moment of silence
bringing knowledge of our own fate
a marker of our mortality... so we cling to it
like shadows dancing across the marble stones
a visitor holding dead flowers
to lay in memory
leaving a blue sky with a hint of gray
that brings shadows to an empty field
of fading stones



9/15/17 contest Poems that paint a picture-2
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Hamilton Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Wonderful free verse Frederick, I a believer in your free verse, I always thought of you as a sonnet writer, but I see you are very versatile, another fine win!
Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Back to offer my congratulations Frederic on your fine win with this amazing poem.
Webster Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:48 PM
congratulations Frederick
La France Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Frederic, so sad and beautiful... CONGRATULATIONS!
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations Frederic! :)
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Haunting write Frederic and a great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:02 PM
you warm my heart by allowing yourself to give a voice to the venerable meaning of honoring those who have gone to rest... so beautiful, frederick..huggs
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Very well done Frederic. Amazing lines with great imagery; 'for the dead have no concern though their names are etched in stone to remember their footprints as they fade away', poetic bliss. Good luck in contest!
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