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G or T Personification' Contest Sponsored by Joseph May

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Grass

With the changing seasons,
I’m the deepest green, sometimes dry and brown
I ‘m tall and wave when the wind blows
Or sometimes short when I am freshly mown.

I’m like a green thick lush blanket
Sometimes used in sports fields
For golf, football or cricket, baseball and softball
I am very durable with contact play.

Warmed by nascent sun gentle rays
They walk on my uniform soft blades
With confidence, giving-way under their feet
Sometimes I’m damp and cool.

If, I’m brown and dry stubble
A crunch beneath their feet you will hear.
I reclaim the earth and thrive.
My shoots stand tall to reach the sky.

I so enjoy the brightness of the day
And cool air after fresh rain-shower.
I shelter earth and insects and what matters
And maybe a dandelion or two in the spring.



8/25/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Narain Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Well penned with vibrant imagery. Great win.
May Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 11:52 PM
Congrats on your win Eve, Very nicely penned
George Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:00 PM
Green is the garb, earth wears in all seasons except perhaps in winter ! It is the most soothing shade ! Beautiful personification dear Eve !
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:55 AM
a very nice one on grass, Eve. I really like this.
Anaya Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Love this, Eve in the grass, who directs the traffic? I read that somewhere. You've described what I think grass should feel like to a tee! ;) great entry! Anaya
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:39 PM
I Try to keep mine watered. With this heat. So , the front is green and the back brown and dry.
Lindley Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 8:26 AM
A very fine personification poem! Yes , grass, what would we do without it. Nature gives us many, many wonders. We all should seek to enjoy its gifts more. -- " "Warmed by nascent sun gentle rays", is my favorite verse! Great poem! God bless.
Puddifoot Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 3:37 AM
i like personification in a poem, and this is a delightful read..'nascent', an unusual word we don't hear very often, but it is perfect in this poem
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Wonderful description, Eve! I love verse 3!
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 5:21 PM
Great!
Burchett Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 1:19 PM
Vivid imagery! Kudos to you! Max
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