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Grass

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With the changing seasons,
I’m the deepest green, sometimes dry and brown
I ‘m tall and wave when the wind blows
Or sometimes short when I am freshly mown.

I’m like a green thick lush blanket
Sometimes used in sports fields
For golf, football or cricket, baseball and softball
I am very durable with contact play.

Warmed by nascent sun gentle rays
They walk on my uniform soft blades
With confidence, giving-way under their feet
Sometimes I’m damp and cool.

If, I’m brown and dry stubble
A crunch beneath their feet you will hear.
I reclaim the earth and thrive.
My shoots stand tall to reach the sky.

I so enjoy the brightness of the day
And cool air after fresh rain-shower.
I shelter earth and insects and what matters
And maybe a dandelion or two in the spring.



8/25/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/2/2023 10:16:00 AM
Well penned with vibrant imagery. Great win.
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve, Very nicely penned
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Date: 8/28/2023 10:00:00 PM
Green is the garb, earth wears in all seasons except perhaps in winter ! It is the most soothing shade ! Beautiful personification dear Eve !
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Date: 8/28/2023 9:55:00 AM
a very nice one on grass, Eve. I really like this.
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Date: 8/27/2023 2:23:00 PM
Love this, Eve in the grass, who directs the traffic? I read that somewhere. You've described what I think grass should feel like to a tee! ;) great entry! Anaya
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/27/2023 2:39:00 PM
I Try to keep mine watered. With this heat. So , the front is green and the back brown and dry.
Date: 8/27/2023 8:26:00 AM
A very fine personification poem! Yes , grass, what would we do without it. Nature gives us many, many wonders. We all should seek to enjoy its gifts more. -- " "Warmed by nascent sun gentle rays", is my favorite verse! Great poem! God bless.
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Date: 8/27/2023 3:37:00 AM
i like personification in a poem, and this is a delightful read..'nascent', an unusual word we don't hear very often, but it is perfect in this poem
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Date: 8/26/2023 8:30:00 PM
Wonderful description, Eve! I love verse 3!
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Date: 8/25/2023 5:21:00 PM
Great!
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Date: 8/25/2023 1:22:00 PM
Awesome personification Eve. We certainly take grass for granted don't we? Yet, what would we do without it?
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Date: 8/25/2023 1:19:00 PM
Vivid imagery! Kudos to you! Max
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