Grasp

“He has made everything suitable in its time. He also has put {the past} in their hearts, yet no one can grasp what God does from the beginning to the end” (Ecclesiastics 3:11)

I remember treading through narrow marshy paths,
Our fields with my father, me as a little child;
While in a slip, like an involuntary maths,
My "grasp" of my father's hand and the way he smiled...

The "vines" creeping climbing crawling filled with ripe grapes,
"Hold" fast to the branches whose endurance seem strong;
And "glide" greatly and gets best of forms and fine shapes,
Source of the air and soil they "inhale" and live long...

As the days went by and when I lost my father,
Just Like creepers and climbers, the strength I did need;
I "clutch" now the hands of the heavenly author,
The father and author of every life well "hued”…

Faced with trials, tribulations we "gasp" and pant,
Only when we "clasp" the hand of God we stand free;
In him, our spirits "soar"; his name we need to chant,
He makes our life whole; wake us his kingdom to see.


02 July 2021
Writing Prompt - Grasp - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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May Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 1:17 PM
"In Him our spirits soar", Beautiful write, Congrats on your wimn
La France Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge! I like the bible quote used and your poem is beautifully penned and you used the required words very well ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A "Beautiful" story/write. Have a blessed day.................
Seeker Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Beautiful conclusion following a tender father-child bond, amazing write, congrats Chris!
Rose  Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Your poetry soars with beauty and strength. No greater love then the love of a Father dear poet, congrats on your win, xo
Kauffman Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 9:26 AM
A beautifully written, tender tribute to your fathers - earthly and heavenly all couched in this childhood memory. This has a lovely lyric quality, like a song - a song of faith life. Congratulations Chris!
Evans Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations. Well done and the flow is so so good.
Poet Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, with this incredible poem
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:24 AM
WoW! This is awesome with a beautiful message. Congratulations
Hankins Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Very nice, Christuraj. I like how you have weaved the required words throughout.
Alex Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thank you very much.
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