Richard Lamoureux Poet Haiku

Grape Haiku

frozen on the vine
cryogenic flavored host
a time released smile

frozen on the vine
ice glistening in the sun
grapes hold on tight

harvest time has come
necter trapped in purple orbs
till glasses are raised

Freddie's Grape Haiku Contest

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Donna Jones May 3, 2013 at 3:38 PM Clink.....:-) Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2013 at 3:43 PM cheers

Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2013 at 3:32 AM - Really enjoyable to read your work, lovely written Richard.- I take a glass with you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2013 at 7:32 AM Sounds good, they make lovely ice wine here in the Okanagan. Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2013 at 3:33 AM * LUCK IN CONTEST !!!!!

Timothy Hicks May 2, 2013 at 11:41 PM Makes me wanna go have a glass of mulled wine right now... MMM! I loved the purple orb description. It's a bit of a dramatic way to simply to say a grape, but yet it makes the grape feel like so much more. Good luck! Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2013 at 7:33 AM The grape truly is so much more. Thanks for adding your flavor to my glass Timothy.

Matthew Anish May 2, 2013 at 9:50 PM Your poem made me thirsty - nice job! Peace and blessings Matthew Anish Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2013 at 10:00 PM Thanks Matthew

Judy Konos May 2, 2013 at 8:48 PM You did it Richard...WOW WEE Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2013 at 9:43 PM Thanks Judy!

Eileen Manassian May 2, 2013 at 7:28 PM Lovely...I liked the "nectar trapped in purple orbs" line. Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2013 at 7:50 PM Thanks, I'm not much of a Haiku guy but I gave it a shot.

Colleen Bono May 2, 2013 at 6:52 PM all i can say is SWEET.and again first one to view and comment on.good night. Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2013 at 6:55 PM literly finished it seconds ago *lol*