Granny's Legacy

When I was a kid, my granny adopted an orphan girl;
I felt insecure upon knowing she would snatch her attention
One time I told that lady to step out of our house
I didn't know that granny heard what I said
She hugged me saying, "You should not treat her like that,
you are luckier and more pampered than her,
if we will not love her, who else would?
Besides, homeless like her deserves 
to be taken care of "
I felt contentment after hearing those words,
But one day, as I talked to that lady
I found out that she was receiving more money
than what granny used to give me for school allowance
Asked granny about it and again hugged me, " You are luckier than her".



Note: 14 lines


3 May 2021

For "Footprints" Old or New for a Prize Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire
3rd place
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George Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:51 AM
Your grandmother seems to be a wonderful lady, so kind and compassionate. She has given succor to an orphan. It is no small service. When you grumbled, she corrected you. . You had a natural right on your grandma's affection. But for the other one, she can take only what is given. So, definitely you have an edge on the orphan. She needs greater show of affection to make her believe that she too is accepted as a member of the family.. Your granny's attitude is so precious, dear Jez.
Alex Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 6:31 AM
It's a beautiful Poem.
Kauffman Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Your grandmother's compassion has left its footprint in your heart JCB. Your poem is so real and expresses your emotions with such transparency. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and a hug.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Granny, one wise lady. Have a blessed day.....................
Seeker Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Great values instilled, congrats on your win, Brul!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations, Dear JCB. A really deep thought you have described with ease. Your Grandmother's wisdom and kindness must have influenced your life and work. A beautiful piece to read again and again. Love ~ Mala
Devonshire Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Your grandmother was right. The woman she adopted did not have the same advantages you had when growing up. It's the luck of the draw, JCB. I was impressed by your grandmother's kindness and wisdom. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Mcintosh Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Wonderfully done... skillful at the art of story telling you are my friend. A blessing to partake of. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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