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Granny's Legacy

When I was a kid, my granny adopted an orphan girl; I felt insecure upon knowing she would snatch her attention One time I told that lady to step out of our house I didn't know that granny heard what I said She hugged me saying, "You should not treat her like that, you are luckier and more pampered than her, if we will not love her, who else would? Besides, homeless like her deserves to be taken care of " I felt contentment after hearing those words, But one day, as I talked to that lady I found out that she was receiving more money than what granny used to give me for school allowance Asked granny about it and again hugged me, " You are luckier than her". Note: 14 lines 3 May 2021 For "Footprints" Old or New for a Prize Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire 3rd place

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Date: 5/9/2021 6:31:00 AM
It's a beautiful Poem.
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Date: 5/6/2021 10:04:00 AM
Your grandmother's compassion has left its footprint in your heart JCB. Your poem is so real and expresses your emotions with such transparency. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and a hug.
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Date: 5/4/2021 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Granny, one wise lady. Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:47:00 AM
Great values instilled, congrats on your win, Brul!
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear JCB. A really deep thought you have described with ease. Your Grandmother's wisdom and kindness must have influenced your life and work. A beautiful piece to read again and again. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 5/4/2021 8:24:00 AM
Your grandmother was right. The woman she adopted did not have the same advantages you had when growing up. It's the luck of the draw, JCB. I was impressed by your grandmother's kindness and wisdom. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/3/2021 6:05:00 AM
Wonderfully done... skillful at the art of story telling you are my friend. A blessing to partake of. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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