Grandpa Lines

sharpening our pencils, mending our shoes a man of many a shade and trade dressing our wounds,piercing our ears squeezing glasses of fresh lemonade to instill in us values and principles never-ending lore, anecdote and fable always radiant in the light of faith he made us pray always at the table the litany of words he spoke with perfect diction all of us cousins would start spelling rewarded us to do adds/subtracts with chalk covering every open space in his dwelling. he made us stand and marked our heights against that ‘wall of pride’, each summer etched lines of growth labeled with names and dates for each of his grandsons, granddaughters I touch the resilient lines of love when I visit, I sit in his rocking chair feel his gentle eyes on me keeping a watch from somewhere
Written on 06/29/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 12:09 PM
- A lovely choice of your poems, with happy memories - Congratulations on your win Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chansarkar Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thanks dear Sunshine!
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sara. Hugs Eve
Chansarkar Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Thanks a lot Eve!
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 9:45 PM
this is a wonderful idea for a poem. Did you enter it in "embrace the lines" contest. I thought that was what it was for. GREAT job.
Chansarkar Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Suri Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:45 AM
This is the perfect one.So beautifully done. Much love, Sara!
Chansarkar Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thanks!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 8:51 AM
If only I knew my grandfather...but I can only imagine while reading through these lines that I grew up in the same era with my grandmother. Beautifully written!!! :)
Chansarkar Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thanks for reading Pace!
Ashe Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Sara, I grew up also with a "wall of pride" and your write is very heartfelt! Yes, he is "keeping a watch" on you...every day! :-)
Chansarkar Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:25 PM
thanks a lot Walter,those days were the best!
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:45 PM
This touched my heart, Sara. Such a wonderful, well-written poem about your Grandpa's special lines and the wonderful years they represented. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:26 PM
thanks for reading Sandra,always appreciate your encouragement!
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