Grandmother

Oh Dear One-
I see you smiling from Heaven
where he took you, for all eternity.
The night he came he said to me-
"Beloved Granddaughter, she is now mine,
you had your time...
remember it always. 
Do not shed a tear for her or me, 
you see... we will now together
forever be."
Immortal Beloved- do you remember 
on that last day?
Devoid of all around but you- 
were you listening?
Did you hear, in that medicinal haze,
did you hear me say
"I love you, now, forever, and always before"?
When I held you tight and felt you leaving,
I was crushed, hardly breathing...
yet I cried...
All the time believing
You were here for me, for us...
Go Immortal Beloved- he has waited long
The tear I now shed is of joy
You are now where you belong...
I Love You,
Our memories are your song.


2nd place in the "I Dreamed" contest
A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 12:48 PM
This was well worthy of the winner's circle, Amy. And so nice to re-read it again here on the featured page! Congrats!! Love, Carrie
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July 13, 2010 at 5:50 PM
that was absolutely beautiful
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July 13, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Okay this one brought me to tears my Grandmother was the only one in my life who ever showed me love. Congrats on being featured! Love Rhonda Hero
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July 12, 2010 at 8:36 PM
Congrats Awesome Amy on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Amy. Love, Carol
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July 11, 2010 at 5:25 PM
beautiful Amy! JB
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April 1, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations on your success with this loving poem. well done Amy....cheers Margaret
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:25 AM
A sad and heartfelt, yet so beautiful poem. Well done, Amy, and sincere congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
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March 28, 2010 at 8:42 AM
very nice and congrats on your win faleshia
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March 27, 2010 at 9:34 PM
So touching Amy- Congrats on the win- and sharing this one with us
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March 27, 2010 at 8:02 PM
Big congrats Amy on your 2nd place win in the I Dreamed contest.. an amazing write and wonderful tribute poem so well written and so well deserved to win..enjoy your special victory..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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March 27, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Lovely poem and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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March 27, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Congratulation, Amy, on second place, in my contest, I Dreamed, with this beautiful poem.. Love Constance
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March 22, 2010 at 7:05 AM
This is so touching Amy - I love it - I like the way that you write and sxpress yourself -Thanks for sharing such an emotional write -:)
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February 26, 2010 at 2:42 PM
I lost my grandmother in 1969 and still miss her. this was a very heart moving poem you wrote and i feel your lost.
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:51 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amy. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 26, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets ... please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight.. Grandmothers are pretty special people.. I know mine was too.. a wonderful and beautiful emotional write Amy.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup ..Linda-Marie..
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