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Grandmas Snack

Grandmas Snack Grandmas long hair, nearly touching the ground It's where my siblings gathered around She'd give us hugs, hugs so tight We would welcome them with great delight On the porch we would sit It was hard to be patient, I would admit Do you want a banana, we would say yes Eating carefully not to make a mess Them bananas taste so great I knew I wanted more, maybe eight Slowly chewing making it last Wanted time to slow down, not so fast I'd give all my money for all it is worth Grandmas bananas were the best on earth Written by: Debra M. Falgout

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/30/2013 4:38:00 PM
Debra, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2013 3:51:00 PM
congrats Debra on your sonnet being featured.
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Date: 5/17/2012 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Debra. Love, Carol
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Debra Falgout
Date: 5/24/2012 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Carol,,so long ago but fresh in my memory,,Love Debra
Date: 5/17/2012 12:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one honoring your Grandmother..Very emotive and expressive ..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Debra Falgout
Date: 5/17/2012 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Sara,,she was a gem!!
Date: 5/16/2012 2:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Outstanding piece. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Debra Falgout
Date: 5/16/2012 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Ralph,,hugsss back to ya!!!
Date: 5/16/2012 1:19:00 AM
Debra congrats on your win..David
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Debra Falgout
Date: 5/16/2012 2:54:00 PM
Thanks David,,have a lovely day!!!
Date: 5/15/2012 11:59:00 PM
Debra, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD
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Debra Falgout
Date: 5/16/2012 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for letting me share this great memory in a poem,,,loved every moment,,,Peace!!!
Date: 4/21/2012 6:56:00 AM
Sweet memories ..... grandmas snack are always the best! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Debra Falgout
Date: 5/16/2012 2:57:00 PM
Yes Anne, grandmas snack are, especially the hugsss that come with them,,,Thanks!!!

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