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Grandma's Old Rocker


Grandma's old creaking rocker
is full of memories,
of a girl and grandma talking.
Oh, the weeping within;
Grandma's old creaking rocker.


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August 3, 2015


Poetry/Verse/Grandma's Old Rocker
Copyright Protected, ID 15-696-909-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, A Prized Refrain, 
sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:09 PM
- I'm a little late, but better late than never B.W. :) - Congratulations your 5. place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Sweet and sad at the same time. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Broken, lovely win... SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Wow an amazing write Broken! Congrats on big win! Reply
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Awesome, Constance. Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 6:52 PM
Such a beautiful verse a 7 and congratulations on your win
Martin Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Really loved this one, Constance!! Know you were close with your grandma! Appreciative of your sentiment.
Duncan Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 2:47 AM
How cute is little verse :) Glad you liked my Happiness poem. I wrote from a junkmail ad stating Free cinnabuns :)
Callus Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:11 PM
These are lovely memories, Constance, even though you miss her a lot. That chair caught my attention as well, and I wrote my refrain based on it. gl in the contest. // paul
Callus Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:37 PM
And back with congratulations, Constance!! Your creaking rocking chair is a winner:) // paul
Smith Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:00 PM
I read one of yours before about that rocker. It must hold some special memories. GL in the contest Tim
Inman Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 4:39 PM
BW, I just read your last three poems, all wonderful, but this one broke my heart in a very good way, if that's possible. rjijr
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:55 AM
Beautiful memories Broken Wings - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Boddie Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 12:38 AM
I like this but then I don't know....endless possibilities would have been a better title for sho....but I guess it had to have your personal stamp....I guess you have us all in inspiration boot camp....;)
La France Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Eric, come back, dear heart, it wasn't finished when you visited. Now it has my personal stamp of sadness.
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