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Grandma's Hands

I will never forget grandma's gentle touch, and no time spent with her will I ever regret because I loved her so much and those hands would reach out for me holding me tightly to her beating heart . . . that is, until death came and she had to depart and it was I, who stroked her soft white hair weeping with tears to fill the wide blue ocean weeping 'til those hands that had grown so fragile lay still, like a twisted road map of her life . . . __________________________ August 15, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/Grandma's Hands Copyright Protected, ID 20-1279-021-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (22) sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 8/17/2020 9:03:00 AM
Very heartwarming write, Constance. I loved "like a twisted road map of her life". You reminded me of my two wonderful grandmothers. Congratulations on your #1. Hugs ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2020 5:51:00 PM
John, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/17/2020 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I wish I had had a grandmother. Enjoy your day and win.................
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Date: 8/17/2020 5:51:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the wonderful _Constance
Date: 8/16/2020 3:24:00 PM
Poignant and beautiful as always, dear Constance. Congrats for your placement in Brian's latest winner list. Finally I will get myself off the computer and get to walking my dog!!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2020 5:52:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 8/15/2020 11:42:00 PM
Such a heart touching poem....Congrats on your win...much love Carol.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/17/2020 5:52:00 PM
Carol, thank you for the comment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 8/15/2020 9:17:00 PM
So touchy. I am remembering my affectionate Grandma. Congrats to win First Place.
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Date: 8/17/2020 5:53:00 PM
Anisha, thank you so much commenting and for the congrats _Constance

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