Grandma's Hands

I will never forget
grandma's gentle touch, and
no time spent with her will I ever regret
            because I loved her so much
and those hands would reach out for me 
holding me tightly to her beating heart . . . 
that is, until death came and she had to depart
and it was I, who stroked her soft white hair weeping
          with tears to fill the wide blue ocean
weeping 'til those hands that had grown so fragile lay
still, like a twisted road map of her life . . . 

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August 15,  2020


Poetry/Free Verse/Grandma's Hands
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1279-021-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (22)
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Very heartwarming write, Constance. I loved "like a twisted road map of her life". You reminded me of my two wonderful grandmothers. Congratulations on your #1. Hugs ~ John
La France Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:51 PM
John, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I wish I had had a grandmother. Enjoy your day and win.................
La France Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the wonderful _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Poignant and beautiful as always, dear Constance. Congrats for your placement in Brian's latest winner list. Finally I will get myself off the computer and get to walking my dog!!
La France Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:52 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Mitra Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 11:42 PM
Such a heart touching poem....Congrats on your win...much love Carol.
La France Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:52 PM
Carol, thank you for the comment and the congrats _Constance
Dutta Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 9:17 PM
So touchy. I am remembering my affectionate Grandma. Congrats to win First Place.
La France Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Anisha, thank you so much commenting and for the congrats _Constance
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