Joyce Johnson Poet Dodoitsu

Grandma's Advice - Grandma Joyce - Hannah

LIVE, LOVE, LAUGH, ALWAYS BE TRUE

DO ALL WELL THAT YOU PURSUE

TREASURE OLD AS WELL AS NEW

YOUR GRANDMA LOVES YOU



Linda Marie's --Magnet Marvel contestwon no. 5 place

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 5:38 AM Congratulations on your win Joyce in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit March 13, 2011 at 6:43 PM Congratulations on winning in the contest. Joyce, this is an impressive dodoitsu.

John Freeman March 13, 2011 at 1:20 PM Great to see you at the top Joyce with this honorable win in fifth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels March 12, 2011 at 1:13 PM This is really sweet Joyce and I think Hannah will treasure it, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest, love Wilma

Kash Poet March 12, 2011 at 7:26 AM Very sweet write Joyce.Congrats on your win---kashinath

Harry Horsman March 11, 2011 at 11:39 PM very wise words of wisdom, Joyce. awesome, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2011 at 10:22 PM Ahhh, so sweet, JOyce. And what a great teaching moment. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 11, 2011 at 6:46 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Joyce

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2011 at 4:10 PM Congratulations..Sara

Michael J. Falotico March 11, 2011 at 3:33 PM Congrats my dear Joyce on your win!!! always Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 11, 2011 at 2:58 PM Congrats Joyce on your success in my magnet contest ..with this heart warming entry luv.. thankxx for your support ...

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2011 at 11:51 PM yes, too bad you couldn't have extra syllables to say Great grandma. haha. I didn't realize this was dodoitsu and had to shave down half my poem to get it into the contest! This is cute. We both did those darling kids!

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2011 at 3:51 PM That would be a good one for a magnet for the ref for sure..Enjoyed reading your work that reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire March 8, 2011 at 9:24 AM Great advice from a loving grandmother, Joyce. Your grandchildren are blessed to have you! Best wishes in the contest with this delightful poem. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta March 7, 2011 at 2:09 PM Lovely alliteration with lovely advice to follow, Joyce

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 1:25 AM What a sane and good advice for your granddaughter. I am sure if she follows this her life will be sweet.

Ryland Matthews March 6, 2011 at 11:48 PM very nice joyce, my grandmother loves me very much and sge shows it every day that im alive. This paragraph displays that love in stunning virtue .... wishing you well in all that you do ... Ryland