Sara Kendrick Poet Dodoitsu

Notes About The Poem

I went shopping one day and wanted to try on those stilettoes but did not..The only way that I could wear them would be to sit down with them on my feet..Beautiful though aren't they...

Grandma Shopping

Discount strip mall far away
One store in mind to search yea
A shoe store that has real styles
Get lost there awhile

Up and down rows more rows_shoes
Danity, fancy, delicate_choose
One catches eye_stilettoes
Try maybe safely

One pair with those high high heels
Sit down slip one on sit still
Lovely shoes beauty to see
Stand up fall on knees

Dodoitsu is suppose to be either about love or humorous
I hope this one gives you a chuckle...

Had written for Linda-Marie's contest
but realized I had left the most important part out..

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet September 12, 2011 at 4:49 PM You made me laugh with this one Sara grandma's are the greatest.Hope you have lots of luck in the contest friend.I've been under the weather for awhile but starting to feel better now so thanks for thinking of me.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2011 at 3:07 AM wonderful Sara, how are you? As for me i just got new internet service... so hope you will see more of me... haha! I love and enjoyed your entry,,, Good luck,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2011 at 11:08 PM aha, you left out the prediction part?? hahaha. This is very cute. And yes, they are supposed to be funny or about love, so hopefully mine will strike people as funny.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 12:22 PM and please don't forget to put your name on your entry Sara..thankxxx...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 12:21 PM thankxxx for supporting my current contest Sara.. u still have time to fix if u need to luv..good luck.. read it fully ..funny..luv..

Jack Horne September 9, 2011 at 10:28 AM LOL, thanks for a good laugh, my friend. I could just imagine this