Grandma

Tears and rain, sit upon my eyelashes. One shows my pain, one washes it away. The grey clouds are one with my breaking heart. Shedding their pain in tune with my souls cry To accept that Grandma is leaving me, is easier to say than to live through. Each slowing beat of her heart pierces me. My second mom, my best friend, dying now. Her grace and wisdom will stay with me still. I am, today, the woman she molded. Touching so many, giving of herself. Angel on earth, soon to be going home.
For "Tetractys" contest Hosted by Jared Pickett Placement: Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 10:05 PM
Congratulations with this fine poem about your grandma. She must have been so special to you. LUv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 8:18 AM
This one should have been one of the top winning poems.........just beautifully written. (My humble opinion) :)
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Jared Picket's contest "Tetractys". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations Paula in your success in Jared's Contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on the HM win, Paula
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Congrats Paula on your HM in Jared's contest with this wonderful write .. an awesome win.. an amazing entry my friend.. enjoy your honor..with luv..
Burns Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 12:52 AM
Form was superb. Content was even better. I was pulled into the emotions of losing my own grandmother quit against my will. A testament to the strength of the authors words. On a final note, it's a pleasure to see soupers challenge themselves with some of the more difficult forms especially when it bears the fruit of this endeavor. Scott...
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 10:19 PM
As a grandma, I can only hope my grandson loves me as much. I love this write. BG
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