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Grampa Jogs

grampa jogs he can't seem to outrun his wrinkles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/12/2012 10:59:00 AM
I remember the discussion of this at your site. What if you said: the wrinkles coming? That gives more a parallel comparison of the fact that they can still "appear" instead of just comparing something already there.
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:20:00 PM
Smilin! Charles! Jimbo
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