Grammy's Ice Capade

I stepped on ice, and took a dive, 
Right before grandbabies five.
Look at Grammy Go-Go-Go!
Then slipped a disc....
Oh, oh, oh, oh!
But I'm Stayin' Alive, Stayin' Alive..........
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Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Cute one. I bet that one hurt. Congrats on your creative winner. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:21 PM
BJ, I feel for you with that painful past experience. Falling is no fun at any age but it is worse as we get older for sure. Sara
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:04 PM
I've slipped on ice and the flinging of the arms, the quick over correcting of feet out of control was very funny to my onlookers, but this poem was actually for fun, drawn from snippets of past experiences that seemed riotously funny. Happily I didn't slip a disc, but I thought it was sort of funny in reference to a 'compact disc' coupled with the tune the tune of 'Stayin' Alive'. Artistic license :-) I was just trying to put together a goofy limerick :-D I was however able to draw from some painfully 'funny' past experiences that seemed hysterical to the kids....but left me with a bruised sternum after tripping and flying through the air with the greatest of ease....that is, until I stopped abruptly! That still generates laughs, albeit nobody laughs at the pain it generated for me or my recovery time! My pride was bruised as much as my sternum was. That was so not fun! Even that makes me laugh though. I should have remembered my age, but boy, what a reminder I got!
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:17 PM
so cute with that song reference. I remember it well! Congrats.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Thank you :-) Yes, that is one fun song. I love it :-)
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:19 PM
clever limerick and i love the music of the bee gees lol:-) many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:50 PM
I love the Bee Gee's <3
Chamberlain Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:52 AM
How funny, slipped disc doesn't sound good. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:49 PM
It was a fictitious poem, and the slipped disc was added for dramatic effect. I've slipped on ice and it's a real hoot, but slipping a disc, no....but still would have seemed like a riotous joke to the onlookers! Funniest videos comes to my mind. Boy, the laughs that show generates! Somehow it all 'looks' so funny...as long as its not a personal experience! It is not so much fun to experience though!
Koplin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your win, BJ!
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thank you!
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Makes me smile to read this BJ - very cute :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thank you Linda, I always appreciate your words of encouragement :-) This isn't so much my forte', usually my poems are in a similar style that I'm familiar with. This was fun to try something totally different!
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Thank you! <3 :-)
Laurie Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 4:31 PM
G’day BJ … and I bet your grandbabies thought it was a great joke. With humour, it always seems better when someone get hurt and it’s not you - thanks for the giggle BJ - Lindsay
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:37 PM
I'm glad it made you giggle <3 :-) It is always funny to see comedic looking scenes, but never as much when it's on a first person experience!
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