Graduation Dance

The gym was dim. 

Red and white balloons 
glittered in the dusk 
while flashing lights writhed 
on the dark floor
like enchanted water-snakes 
gliding through scented fog. 

This was a celebration dance! 

Eighth grade done at last,
they stepped, hesitant, into the roiling 
teen-age sea,their synchronous, bobbing heads 
attuned to the be-bop rhythms of the city (not their city), 
and the lusty calls of the hood (not their hood).

Smooth gym walls echoed the dj's mechanical angst
endless, relentless beats, the racing heart of the machine, 
artificial sighs, nano-seconds long and gigabytes wide. 

The boys, spinning on heads and leaping from hands and 
flailing legs, showed an athleticism 
never seen in PE, 
while the girls huddled in their own dark corner
and planned their move;

their fashion walk, 
legs strutting ahead
of swaying hips, 
heels clicking the hard, dark floor, 
as they stalked right up to the foul line

where boys were spinning and leaping
through throbbing lights 
to the tribal, primal beat.

So the girls turned, 
hips flung in defiance, 
and sashayed back to the wall, 
staring hard at the gaping boys 
over their swaying shoulders.

(28 May 2009)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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