Notes About The Poem

Graduation

You remember her running to find the beach
And when an adventure was eating a peach
And nothing she wanted was out of reach

You remember her terrified of anything new
So fragile and brave the first day of school
Then proudly parading the picture she drew

You remember the first Halloween she created
That goulish green dress, and the glitter she raided!
You found it today, in a box, old and faded

You remember so much - her first Christmas play,
Her first slumber party, her first grounded day
You see the years, like a thief, slowly stole her away

She'll run now alone to her life, and choose
Her own path to what she will find, and lose
This is her stage, her spotlight, her bow
Love her forever, let her go now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Peck Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:57 AM
I just read this, Michelle. It's so poignant and beautiful. The hardest thing is letting go...
Horsman Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 10:29 PM
Amazing introductory poem, for soup, Michelle. I'm sure you were here before this poem though, or maybe i'm just getting old and the memory also.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem. Life with kids go by so fast. Young one day then off on their own. Enjoy your win and day.............
Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Wow! The last two stanzas are really superb, Michelle. What a great first entry on the Soup's site. (And right above mine on the winner's list too! I think they grouped us together because of our friendship and the genuine respect we have for each other... Well, maybe not. But it doesn't take anything away from our mutual admiration society, methinks). Meaningful Memories, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 9:51 PM
You were the first to comment on my first poem, and made me feel encouraged and included, and I will always be grateful to you, Gershon.
Gauthier Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 1:50 PM
Awesome first post ~ how appropriate that it is a tribute to beginnings. Congrats on your two-year anniversary with PS.
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:50 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Michelle ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:45 AM
A great first post, so touching... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Wow. And a lump in my throat. xomo
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 10:05 PM
Wow ~ sweet and very touching. Lovely, Michelle.
Watt Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Michelle, I wish there were emojis available in the comment box to show hearts and little tears coming out of smiling faces. This message to your sister about celebrating the memories and letting go is absolutely heartwarming. My daughter graduated in 2016 and her mom and I lived this poem. So touching.
Faulkner Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 1:28 PM
That is touching to me, thank you for seeking out my first poem posted and commenting on it! It was a written a long time ago but it still feels fresh to me-
Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 7:54 AM
An excellent first offering to the Soup.
Faulkner Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Belated thanks, Rick-
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful debut poem, Michelle! Your poignant words speaks to us all ... parent and child. An instant fave. Welcome to the Soup, dear. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Wonderful! I love it!
Faulkner Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Thank you Kim, it means a lot to get a comment on an older poem, (especially since this is the first one I ever posted) appreciate it!
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Wonderful! Every parent should read this. We really need to let go--let the bird fly! The last couplet is simply splendid! Bravo, Michelle! :) Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words! This was written for my sister when her daughter graduated high school - Michelle
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace