Krish Radhakrishna Poet Triolet

Graciousness

spark of divinity in us aflare,
is spark of graciousness aglow within,
is a gift from heaven that we should share!
spark of divinity in us aflare
is an ocean of love to show we care,
is a light that guides us past earthly sin!
spark of divinity in us aflare
is spark of graciousness aglow within!!


Premier contest winner (5)
Graciousness poetry contest
Mohan Chutani
Written 18/11/2020

10 syllables each line ABa, Aab, AB rhyme!

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Sam Kauffman December 2, 2020 at 1:48 PM A trinity of gracious stanzas extolling the "fires" of graciousness that "guide us past earthly sin!" Love the way you formatted and highlighted the qualities of graciousness. Beautiful compassionate triolet of faith and caring! Congratulations my friend! Krish Radhakrishna December 2, 2020 at 1:58 PM Thanks Sam! Your gracious words bring cheer to my heart!:)

John Watt November 27, 2020 at 12:27 PM Krish, congratulations for the admirable placement for your well-crafted triolet. Your faith is evident in your words, as is your heart of compassion towards others. Well done! Krish Radhakrishna November 27, 2020 at 2:05 PM John thank you and god bless! Life events have strengthened my faith! Lovely to hear from you!!

Linda Alice Fowler November 27, 2020 at 7:20 AM Hi Krish. Congratulations on the win! Linda Krish Radhakrishna November 27, 2020 at 8:05 AM Thanks Linda!:)

Eve Roper November 26, 2020 at 8:13 AM Back with congratulations and Happy Thanksgiving. Hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna November 26, 2020 at 9:11 AM Thank you very much Eve! Happy Thanksgiving to you too! Lets hope next year we are saying this with greater freedom and happiness!:)

Jenna Logan November 26, 2020 at 6:07 AM Congratulations on your winning write, Krish. Grand thoughts. Krish Radhakrishna November 26, 2020 at 7:23 AM Thanks Jenna! for that comment from you, I shall take a bow! Honoured!

Mohan Chutani November 25, 2020 at 6:46 PM Krish, congratulations for your placement in my contest and thanks for graciously participating in it. It was so difficult to choose one from the other. Would have loved to place all entries as winners had it not been a Premier contest. Best. Mohan Krish Radhakrishna November 26, 2020 at 7:25 AM Mohan thank you for another lovely contest! Honoured to be on the winner list!

Janice Canerdy November 21, 2020 at 8:28 PM Vividly descriptive, uplifting piece, Krish! Janice Krish Radhakrishna November 21, 2020 at 10:16 PM Thanks Janice! your words uplift me too!:)

Gershon Wolf November 19, 2020 at 3:43 PM Elegant and exquisite penning, Krish. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon Krish Radhakrishna November 21, 2020 at 1:29 PM Thanks Gershon! Pleased you like!!:) Regards

Linda Alice Fowler November 19, 2020 at 12:30 PM Very lovely triolet Krish. Best wishes in the contest! :) Linda Krish Radhakrishna November 19, 2020 at 12:52 PM Thanks Linda. So happy to have your visit!:)

Eve Roper November 18, 2020 at 8:09 PM Krish, very inspiring. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna November 18, 2020 at 11:39 PM Thanks Eve! for your words of appreciation! Hugs!:)

Constance La France November 18, 2020 at 6:35 AM Krish, a lovely rhyming poem, well done _Constance Krish Radhakrishna November 18, 2020 at 6:50 AM Thanks Constance! Appreciate your kind words! regards! :)