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Gracious Assurance of Love

When moonglow drapes evening's skyline Our mind still reels from the hard work of a day, But touches the rhythm of timed breath Seeking quiet from a night which grows tender: And here in this space, the flowers waft Of stars' rock-a-bye, traipsing a slow-dance, Waiting for the promised hush of the wind Softly caressing time upon light’s grace; And finding ardor ripple in the bathe of comfort, Trickling, fondling dusk 's gentleness. Night, lulled by serenades of robins’ tweet Rests on cloud’s nest like a glide on a lattice; That like an open flight, hearts are calmed: And our last wisp together drools:” Shh, beloved, Dream with me of love's most gracious intent..," And the world passes by through a warm embrace, Where sleep meets a lull of earnest assurance. Laura Loo's Free Verse on Love III ~ New poem 10/29/2017

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Date: 11/2/2017 1:09:00 AM
Congratulations, nette on you fine win.
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Date: 11/1/2017 2:40:00 PM
Tender but with passion I can feel that you feel the words you write, congrats on your win
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:05:00 AM
So romantic and passionate. Thank you and congrats lovely Nette:)
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:13:00 AM
What a delightfully loving write my friend! You have certainly built a tender and soft poem about love Nette! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious piece here this morning! "And finding ardor ripple in the bathe of comfort,/ Trickling, fondling dusk's gentleness,/ such powerful lines these two are full of heart sent peace and that of pure love throughout every pore of its passion! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/29/2017 8:07:00 AM
This is just lovely...
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Date: 10/28/2017 8:55:00 PM
This is an exquisite reflection of yourself Nette! Lovely! xxoo
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Date: 10/28/2017 8:15:00 PM
your words are a silk slippered waltz Nette...lovely :)
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Date: 10/28/2017 6:15:00 PM
Wow, you have a magnificent gift of poetry to be shared. One cannot rush through your reads which are to be savored tenderly, allowing all the elements of love's safety to be felt in its true glory!
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Date: 10/28/2017 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem of love--full of rhythm and artful words--best for a win, nette!
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