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Gracefully Bows As She Leaves

Forest alive now Autumn colors brilliant glow Poplar_ Maple grow Colors seen_red, yellow, rust Auroras of autumn flow Elegantly dressed For the last ball before snow She smiles at artist As he gathers paints blends shades Painting her colorful gown As sunlight dances Against gown that glows with dew Gracefully she bows As bare limbs begin to show Last of grace before first snow

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Fabiyas M V

Date: 5/8/2012 10:14:00 PM

Nicely flowing sweet verse,Sara.Congratulations on your great win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2012 2:58:00 PM

a resplendent work that makes autumn glow, sara... congrats on your fine win..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2012 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 3:23:00 PM

Beautiful, thanks for visiting my poems, I am afraid I don't come as often as I should, I am usually tied up in story land, but I like to cheat and take time for poetry, enjoyed reading yours :) Sheri

L'Nass Shango

Date: 11/9/2010 5:27:00 PM

Lady Sara, poet and friend, thanks for offering me art in poetry ... I read you with great pleasure for this.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2010 6:14:00 AM

You did a fantastic job with this fall tanka, Sara! I love the way your tree comes to life and takes a bow, her last encore before the "first snow." Best wishes in the contest! Hoping you get some good news tomorrow. Love, Carolyn

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/7/2010 4:25:00 PM

enjoyed this autumn write, i think i will take a walk in the woods. thank you sara.

James Peranteau

Date: 11/7/2010 7:21:00 AM

I wonder if with your write here, souls will understand my "Truculant knave" ? great write ! much love, james

John Rhinem

Date: 11/7/2010 6:50:00 AM

Small ~ I believe that Autumns eyes are smiling upon "Your Splendours" for this magical verse my dear; truly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious Sara Kendrick,' Amid The Soft & Vibrant Hues of, 'Such Beautiful Love;' Bye My Dear!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 11/7/2010 6:44:00 AM

Smile ~ This is so very beautiful "My Dear, 'Lovely & Precious Sara Kendrick!!!'" ~ So much inside of this colourful poe to be found; the dawning; the Artist; natures awareness; gentleness; a Princess; a Prince ~ Wow, it paints "Your Beauties" heart so very pretty; so very beautiful; a fave ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing wonderfully dear &, "Thank You" for the kind com the other day; always nice to behold "Your Brightness" ~ ....Cont:)

Kim Hilliker

Date: 11/7/2010 6:44:00 AM

Beautifully written piece! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/7/2010 6:12:00 AM

You have painted a lovable picture of the autumn about to say goodbye to us, Sara